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Dewdrops cling onto blades of grass like sparkling drops of liquid glass. And as the songbirds sweetly sing onto blades of grass, dewdrops cling. With wondrous wings, butterflies fly, like paintings afloat in the sky. One of nature's prettiest things, butterflies fly with wondrous wings. Crickets stridulate for females, their constant chirping prevails. Relying totally on fate for a mate, crickets stridulate. Gardenia blooms in summer's heat, an absolute sensual treat. Clad in their green and white costumes, In summer's heat, gardenia blooms. Shadows merge, diminishing day, as a sinking sun slips away. And rising like a tidal surge, diminishing day, shadows merge.

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Date: 10/5/2022 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful verse, with great imagery , and soothing feel my friend. Congratulations on 1st on best poems.
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2022 1:06:00 PM
This in incredibly beautiful <3 Congratulations in the top tier of Best new poems, this is a fav for me!
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Date: 9/26/2022 2:36:00 PM
Thanks, BJ, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2022 8:53:00 AM
Beautifully emotional and expressive in magical visuals Emile ! I fell into its wonders ! Congratulations on your win. All the best , Susan :)
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Date: 9/26/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2022 12:15:00 AM
A lovely poem about nature, well done.
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Date: 9/24/2022 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Jeanette, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2022 5:03:00 PM
Emile, such beautiful imagery as you take us on a nature walk through a delightful summer day. I love the thought of "butterflies fly, like paintings afloat in the sky." Well done, and congrats for your win in the recent marathon mile ~ John
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Date: 9/21/2022 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, John, as always, I both welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2022 4:28:00 AM
Clearly one that would not be so easy to write. Way to go with POTD. Sara
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Date: 9/18/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/12/2022 3:44:00 PM
This is beautiful. I love it. Congrats on your top placement. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/12/2022 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 9/12/2022 10:45:00 AM
Dear Emile, your artistry takes my breath away as it transports to the center of this exquisite scene. A masterfully crafted swap rhyme so beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/12/2022 3:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/12/2022 10:01:00 AM
Emile, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~
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Date: 9/12/2022 3:50:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/12/2022 9:49:00 AM
Emile, your mastery of the swap quatrain is awesome. It flows so smoothly and your choice of rhymes is sublime. A FAVE for me. Congratulations. Hoping you'll be a strong finish in the marathon. I'm rooting for you!
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Date: 9/12/2022 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, as always you make my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:26:00 PM
Great nature poem. Full of flesh in it. Dew-drops clinging, songbirds singing, paintings afloating... Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/12/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:25:00 PM
Emile, with your swap quatrain you take us on a beautiful journey through nature from early morning "dewdrops" as they "cling to blades of grass" to "diminishing day, as a sinking sun slips away." A Fav for me. Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!
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Date: 9/12/2022 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I appreciate both the placement and your comments, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:21:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Emile!
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Date: 9/12/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2022 7:28:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, and the last stanza magical. Congratulations in the Marathon. Harry
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Date: 9/11/2022 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 8/13/2022 10:38:00 PM
This is just excellent Emile. Nature’s enchantment spills from lines that reach perfection. Congratulations on your deserving win. I am Faving this gem. I hope you share it with PFT! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, you always manage to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2022 4:17:00 PM
Emile, beautiful poem and image and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 8/12/2022 5:18:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2022 8:04:00 PM
Seems to be a difficult style to adopt, superbly crafted, Emile
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Date: 8/9/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2022 4:25:00 PM
A beautiful poem thanks.
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Date: 8/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thanks, Les, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2022 4:04:00 PM
Very beautifully written dear Emile. Your writing was always high caliber , Thankyou for sharing :)
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Date: 8/8/2022 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Mystic, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

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