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Dewdrops cling onto blades of grass; like sparkling drops of liquid glass. And in the morn when songbirds sing; onto blades of grass, dewdrops cling. With wondrous wings, butterflies fly; like paintings afloat in the sky. One of nature's prettiest things; butterflies fly with wondrous wings. Crickets stridulate for females; till their constant chirping prevails. Relying totally on fate for a mate, crickets stridulate. Gardenia bloom in summer's heat; an absolute sensual treat. Clad in their green and white costume; in summer's heat, gardenia bloom. Shadows merge, diminishing day; as a sinking sun slips away. And rising like a tidal surge; diminishing day, shadows merge.

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2022 8:03:00 AM

Beautiful verse, with great imagery , and soothing feel my friend. Congratulations on 1st on best poems.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/5/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/26/2022 1:06:00 PM

This in incredibly beautiful <3 Congratulations in the top tier of Best new poems, this is a fav for me!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/26/2022 2:36:00 PM

Thanks, BJ, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/26/2022 8:53:00 AM

Beautifully emotional and expressive in magical visuals Emile ! I fell into its wonders ! Congratulations on your win. All the best , Susan :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/26/2022 10:03:00 AM

Thanks, Susan, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 9/24/2022 12:15:00 AM

A lovely poem about nature, well done.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/24/2022 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Jeanette, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

John Watt

Date: 9/20/2022 5:03:00 PM

Emile, such beautiful imagery as you take us on a nature walk through a delightful summer day. I love the thought of "butterflies fly, like paintings afloat in the sky." Well done, and congrats for your win in the recent marathon mile ~ John

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/21/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thanks, John, as always, I both welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2022 4:28:00 AM

Clearly one that would not be so easy to write. Way to go with POTD. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/18/2022 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/12/2022 3:44:00 PM

This is beautiful. I love it. Congrats on your top placement. God bless you. Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 3:53:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2022 10:45:00 AM

Dear Emile, your artistry takes my breath away as it transports to the center of this exquisite scene. A masterfully crafted swap rhyme so beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 3:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2022 10:01:00 AM

Emile, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 3:50:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/12/2022 9:49:00 AM

Emile, your mastery of the swap quatrain is awesome. It flows so smoothly and your choice of rhymes is sublime. A FAVE for me. Congratulations. Hoping you'll be a strong finish in the marathon. I'm rooting for you!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 3:51:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, as always you make my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/11/2022 8:26:00 PM

Great nature poem. Full of flesh in it. Dew-drops clinging, songbirds singing, paintings afloating... Beautiful. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 7:10:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Mark Toney

Date: 9/11/2022 8:25:00 PM

Emile, with your swap quatrain you take us on a beautiful journey through nature from early morning "dewdrops" as they "cling to blades of grass" to "diminishing day, as a sinking sun slips away." A Fav for me. Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 7:07:00 AM

Thanks, Mark, I appreciate both the placement and your comments, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/11/2022 8:21:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2022 7:06:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/11/2022 7:28:00 PM

Wonderful poetry, and the last stanza magical. Congratulations in the Marathon. Harry

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2022 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2022 10:38:00 PM

This is just excellent Emile. Nature’s enchantment spills from lines that reach perfection. Congratulations on your deserving win. I am Faving this gem. I hope you share it with PFT! Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/14/2022 7:53:00 AM

Thanks, Connie, you always manage to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2022 4:17:00 PM

Emile, beautiful poem and image and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, blessings ~Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/12/2022 5:18:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/8/2022 8:04:00 PM

Seems to be a difficult style to adopt, superbly crafted, Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.