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It's chilling outside, and it's shivery. Wary of the downpour, she remains mostly, Under the forlorn tree, similar to a statue, Eyes, the cloud of sunset sparkles too. I view murkiness from afar off the shimmer of Orion. Our spirit imperativeness conveys me to the horizon, Stars brushing and sky sparkle are wonderstruck. Same as sculpture mold on a wall that you can pluck. Her attractiveness is obvious to me, in complete calm. Or when she cries in the middle of a mountain balm. I'm ready to perceive her beauty in her heart and mind. Inside the moles on her face, she blemishes as a hind. Everything she is, or everything she shows. When the night is ending, it expands and grows. I understand I'm depicting my woman purposely. There's a ton of things we don't even see, In a world with everything we crave, yet disagree. Need to be cherished, ensured, and in security.
Written: November 28, 2021 Wonderstruck Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 12/1/2021 3:13:00 AM
I might be wrong here Lasaad, but I am thinking the underlying message is "don't judge a book by its cover". ...Delice
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Date: 11/29/2021 6:24:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. It is creative and descriptive about the lady in your life. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2021 4:44:00 AM
Delightful feelings you convey, Lasaad. Beautiful images.
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Date: 11/29/2021 2:03:00 AM
Your imagery takes this poem to a higher level. Well done,
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Date: 11/28/2021 8:05:00 PM
Magnificent imagery encompasses this lovely, creative write.
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Date: 11/28/2021 7:36:00 PM
An enchanting scene.... ! The loveliness of nature, beautifully depicted !
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