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Wonderstruck Loveliness

It's chilling outside, and it's shivery. Wary of the downpour, she remains mostly, Under the forlorn tree, similar to a statue, Eyes, the cloud of sunset sparkles too. I view murkiness from afar off the shimmer of Orion. Our spirit imperativeness conveys me to the horizon, Stars brushing and sky sparkle are wonderstruck. Same as sculpture mold on a wall that you can pluck. Her attractiveness is obvious to me, in complete calm. Or when she cries in the middle of a mountain balm. I'm ready to perceive her beauty in her heart and mind. Inside the moles on her face, she blemishes as a hind. Everything she is, or everything she shows. When the night is ending, it expands and grows. I understand I'm depicting my woman purposely. There's a ton of things we don't even see, In a world with everything we crave, yet disagree. Need to be cherished, ensured, and in security.
Written: November 28, 2021 Wonderstruck Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
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Skelly Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 3:13 AM
I might be wrong here Lasaad, but I am thinking the underlying message is "don't judge a book by its cover". ...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Interesting work that you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. It is creative and descriptive about the lady in your life. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Delightful feelings you convey, Lasaad. Beautiful images.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:03 AM
Your imagery takes this poem to a higher level. Well done,
Buehler Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 8:05 PM
Magnificent imagery encompasses this lovely, creative write.
George Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 7:36 PM
An enchanting scene.... ! The loveliness of nature, beautifully depicted !
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