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Wonders Unseen

Peering through a telescope, the Horse Head Nebula swirls in green. Casting aside times when she lacked hope, the universe emerges on a vast screen. Behold welcome wonders heretofore unseen. *Entry for Brian's "latest 50" contest

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Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/18/2012 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your winning Carolyn. Love, Sarah.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2012 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your Super win in Brian's "Last Fifty"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/18/2012 9:44:00 AM

This is grand, Carolyn..I will have to look up this mysterious nebula swirling in green..I learned so much about outer space from the IMAX movie about the Hubble telescope..planet nurseries and star birthers..God didn't hold anything back when He hung the big screen.CONGRATS!! Love, Gwendolen

David Williams

Date: 1/18/2012 3:03:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your win, nice read..David ........think it's your turn with the Clerihew...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2012 5:51:00 PM

The night sky in all its wonder is difficult to see with all this pollution! GOOD one Congrad's Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2012 5:35:00 PM

Congrats on your winning entry..Sara

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/17/2012 4:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2012 4:27:00 PM

There is so much seen and unseen in this vast universe.....just thinking of it, puts all imagination into that place of 'wonder'! Provocative poem it is!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2012 2:55:00 PM

Congrats Carolyn!!! So happy to see you in the winners list. Luv n hugs Michael

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/17/2012 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations Carolyn. Nicely written.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 5:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2012 11:00:00 PM

Very nice poem for Francine's contest, and I can see why she chose this one. This is a fine example of an English Quintain. I have one question: How did you get your typed characters italicized here?

Jack Horne

Date: 12/31/2011 2:38:00 PM

I just love this piece, Carolyn. It reminds me of a friend's telescope and the way I was totally wowed

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/31/2011 6:56:00 AM

Like this, congrats. harry

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/29/2011 7:18:00 PM

Andrea's right I love Quintains, congrats on your win Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2011 6:29:00 PM

Very interesting topic you chose, Carolyn.You did a great quintain. I think Francine loves that form, right? Congrats on your win.(oh the capcha says BABY. hahaha)