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Wonders Never Cease - Ct

I smiled when orange sun bursts peered, They blush for purple iris leafs, Us spring tide heart flames so revered, Like robin red breasts perched on eaves Cosmic arcs harvest moonlight spread, Leafy woodland suburbs green shed, Garden mazes gold mint spiked trail, Scented frosts plough a snow drop veil When orange sun bursts peered they blush, For purple iris leafs I smiled, So revered like robin red breasts, Perched on eaves us spring tide heart flames Fountains spray with ice tip sprinkles, Seven wonders dash in twinkles. Poem created : 9 September 2020 Contest : Charonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor : Charles Messina Poetry Soup Syllable Counter verified Poetry Soup Grammar Checker verified NB In case of any ambiguity enclosed please find approved Poetry Soup Syllable Counter Report on the above contest entry Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 Total # Syllables: 112

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Date: 10/14/2020 12:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:30:00 AM
what wonderful imagery Howard, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:41:00 AM
Howard, great poetry my friend. Unfortunately, the last stanza was off or this would have placed higher. Congratulations on your placement! All the best...Charlie
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Howard Kerr
Date: 10/13/2020 7:04:00 PM
Hi Charles, Many thanks for your award which I’m always grateful for. I also appreciate the constructive feedback Take care Howard

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