Wondering

White caps glistening on the horizon
As the sun sets on a restless sea
I wonder where your thoughts are
And do you ever think of me

Have you seen my smile in the breaking waves
Or tasted my kiss in the salted mist
Felt my touch in the evening breeze
Heard my voice in the seabirds midst

Have you seen me standing on distant shore
Or floating by on a snow white cloud
Have you ever reached for a vision of me 
Or called my name out loud

Wished I was there to say goodnight
Or  beside you with morning anew
Have you ever asked yourself
If I've seen or felt these things for you

Sometimes the things we want to know
We wish we never knew
So a mystery this may remain
While I wonder if your wondering too
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 17, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Dawn Drickman, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Dawn Drickman, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
Hickman Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 6:41 AM
That's the stuff to give 'em, what a well constructed poem, and so inventive. It's a real treat!! Gordon, (hicky)
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March 13, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on being featured with your poem. Reflection in this poem is right on.
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January 31, 2010 at 12:33 PM
I like this poem, Dawn. I have done that kind of wondering before... wondering where someone is, what they are doing, if their life was good. We lose so many of our school days friends after graduation. Nice poetry. Keep your poetry flowing. Smiles... Dane Ann
George   Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Dawn, this is a magnificent reflective rendering of poetry. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
Mckenzie Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Dawn~ I love this magical write! Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Its going to my favorites! Laura :0)
Guzzi Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Very very perceptive write! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Dawn. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
A Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 8:28 PM
Felt that... thanks for sharing. Keep it up! :)
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December 28, 2009 at 5:31 PM
Yeah, I relate to that. Well done Dawn. Congratulations on being featured this week.
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on this featured well written poem. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 8:35 AM
that was lovely, I really enjoyed it
Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
Segal Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Really enjoyed this poem, thank you! love Simone
Guzzi Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Congrads on being featured it's a very unique love poem. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Beauty is read and felt in the Rhyme that is being featured this week. Keep the magical pen flowing. I am adding you to my fav poet's list. Sara
Fisher Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Dawn - many congrats on your poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Austin Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Such a lonely song...so beautiful. Congrats on this selection. daver
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November 16, 2009 at 8:49 PM
Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
Sheart Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Congrats on your freature poem this week! Love Light Patty
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dawn. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 2:53 AM
Very descriptive and imaginative poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Golden Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 2:22 AM
Fantastic piece, here, Dawn! This is such a creative way of wording the question so many would like to ask of a lost love. Bravo! Hugs, Donna
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