Wondering-

the clouds outside brought along the thunder
making the pillars of the courthouse want to fall
sitting at my desk I began to wonder
as the teacher spoke he faded into the wall 

my mind drifted like a piece of wood
with my imagination running ahead
pulling my thoughts as far as they could
in and around like a needle and thread 

forgetting the lesson for the day
and finding a hidden corner of my mind
I knew the path but not the way
as I sat there letting the trail unwind 

I was lost by all my mind had to show
with no one but me to offer suggestions 
the good the bad the high the low
like one answer to a thousand questions 

fluttering around like a sparrow
I couldn’t find a ceiling or a floor
but the walls only seemed to narrow
as I reached for the only door 

opening to misplaced dreams of the past
and memories that had long departed
hoping this place would forever last
but I began to float back to where I started 

realizing I had landed from my mental flight 
I looked about a class full of hollow aspirations
blindly nodding their heads whether wrong or right
without chasing their own imaginations

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/12/2009 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Luke. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:01:00 PM
Luke, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:59:00 PM
Luke, this piece is wonderfully written and so full of perception and deep truths. Fantastic write! It's going into my favorites. Blessinsg on you today. Donna Golden
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Date: 1/29/2009 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.. God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing.*Tyesha
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations Luke on your poetry being chosen to feature this week. May you have many more excellent poems featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/26/2009 9:14:00 AM
congratulations Luke, on "Wondering..." being featured. Imagination is one of the greatest gifts we have. Technology is sedating it for many. Sad. Vince
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Date: 1/18/2009 12:18:00 AM
It seems like you're off to great start here at the soup Luke. I felt like I came back from the journey with. Very introspective...I hope you find what you're looking for when you drift off again... Keep doing what you're doing. :-)
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