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Please look after planet earth cherish her for all she’s worth Observe clouds in skies of blue, cobwebs laced with morning dew lambs gamboling in the fields beauty mother nature yields Please look after planet earth! Elemental Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 7 syllables per line checked with HMS 07/07/21

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Date: 8/5/2021 11:27:00 PM
Way late on this One Belated Kudos..... Pangie
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Date: 8/1/2021 11:17:00 PM
Back with my hearty congratulations, Jan:)
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Date: 8/1/2021 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I also love the song. Thanks for adding. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 7/31/2021 7:12:00 PM
This is gorgeous. I LOVE IT. so amazing. God bless you always, and CONGRATS. love, Gina
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Date: 7/31/2021 4:17:00 AM
A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing!
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Date: 7/31/2021 3:59:00 AM
Wonderful poetry with a great message, Jan. I absolutely love this. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
Begging and pleading for what should in reality be patently obvious. You would think hey Jan. If things have to be explained surely the point becomes or is rendered irrelevant
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Date: 7/11/2021 9:15:00 AM
Nice Reading. Starting line is excellent. All the best
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2021 8:33:00 AM
OH WOW - A DEFINITE WIN FOR SURE. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM
A win is a bonus Jennifer, i hope the sponsor likes it, without these contest prompts so many poems would never be written:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2021 4:34:00 AM
Nice message, Jan:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM
thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/9/2021 5:54:00 PM
Great message. It's the little things like "cobwebs laced with morning dew" that leave me in awe.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM
Thanks Juliet thats my fave line in the poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 10:59:00 PM
Perfect.....
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 9:07:00 PM
You are such a nice soul very inspiring. You need not keep trying if you are getting error. Leave it and try later or soupmail. There was a problem in my poem, deleted and reposted. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care, Rama
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:45:00 AM
I have managed to comment on it, it was so wonderful I wanted you to know:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 5:25:00 PM
WOW!!! This is filled with such a gifted and skilled vision and verse. I love it. God bless you with a win, Jan. Love, Gina
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 11:50:00 AM
The One Commandment of a Navajo is to, "Walk in beauty" which is increasingly difficult as tourists trash the roadside and everyone wears a facemask .....Best wishes for a win! Aloha! Rico
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 10:04:00 AM
Nice entry, best of luck! (And I may have just learned the word 'gamboling') haha :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Avery i love seeing the lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 6:59:00 AM
Wow! Superb penning! Great imagery and message! Another win coming your way. Congratulations in advance.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/8/2021 8:30:00 AM
thanks Rama, i have tried 4 times to post this comment on your latest poem but keep getting system 500 error. 'superb alliteration and i love that final line Rama!' I will keep trying to post the comment on your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2021 4:06:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem on nature... Loved reading it... Thanks for sharing...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 11:27:00 PM
I always find it incredible that persons should be so dirty that they abuse our wonderful earth, Hugs.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Victor it is tragic the way man is destroying what mother nature has provided:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 8:41:00 PM
Mother Earth needs someone to look after her, great contest entry, Jan~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 6:15:00 PM
This comment is a bit off-topic, but... Check out pictures of the soon-to-be new Mayor of New York City, Eric Adams. Startling resemblance to the photo of Louis Armstrong above your poem. Woudn't have thought of it... :) gw
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:51:00 AM
wow there is a striking resemblence!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:50:00 AM
I will check it out,,, wonder if he can sing!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 5:35:00 PM
Indeed... mother Earth... how beautiful she is... but not as good as you ... Always
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:52:00 AM
oh Pashang you make my spirits soar like a butterfly:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 4:44:00 PM
Absolutely! Mother Nature does such a good job looking after us -- it is the least we can do. Excellent write! Oh, love Louis. An amateur drummer all my life, addicted to jazz, I have pounded out many a beat while listening to Mr. Armstrong's great recordings.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Joe i love the music of the era, now do swing dancing to 40s style music:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 4:06:00 PM
Marvelous lines, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your little poem, and wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 3:43:00 PM
Best of luck!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/9/2021 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Pangie:-) hugs Jan xx
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