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Wonderful World El

Please look after planet earth cherish her for all she’s worth Observe clouds in skies of blue, cobwebs laced with morning dew lambs gamboling in the fields beauty mother nature yields Please look after planet earth! Elemental Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 7 syllables per line checked with HMS 07/07/21

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2021 11:17:00 PM

Back with my hearty congratulations, Jan:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I also love the song. Thanks for adding. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/31/2021 7:12:00 PM

This is gorgeous. I LOVE IT. so amazing. God bless you always, and CONGRATS. love, Gina

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:17:00 AM

A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 3:59:00 AM

Wonderful poetry with a great message, Jan. I absolutely love this. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs // Charlie xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/12/2021 2:20:00 PM

Begging and pleading for what should in reality be patently obvious. You would think hey Jan. If things have to be explained surely the point becomes or is rendered irrelevant

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/11/2021 9:15:00 AM

Nice Reading. Starting line is excellent. All the best

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2021 8:33:00 AM

OH WOW - A DEFINITE WIN FOR SURE. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM

A win is a bonus Jennifer, i hope the sponsor likes it, without these contest prompts so many poems would never be written:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2021 4:34:00 AM

Nice message, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM

thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 7/9/2021 5:54:00 PM

Great message. It's the little things like "cobwebs laced with morning dew" that leave me in awe.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM

Thanks Juliet thats my fave line in the poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/8/2021 10:59:00 PM

Perfect.....

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/8/2021 9:07:00 PM

You are such a nice soul very inspiring. You need not keep trying if you are getting error. Leave it and try later or soupmail. There was a problem in my poem, deleted and reposted. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care, Rama

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:45:00 AM

I have managed to comment on it, it was so wonderful I wanted you to know:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/8/2021 5:25:00 PM

WOW!!! This is filled with such a gifted and skilled vision and verse. I love it. God bless you with a win, Jan. Love, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/8/2021 11:50:00 AM

The One Commandment of a Navajo is to, "Walk in beauty" which is increasingly difficult as tourists trash the roadside and everyone wears a facemask .....Best wishes for a win! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won

Date: 7/8/2021 10:04:00 AM

Nice entry, best of luck! (And I may have just learned the word 'gamboling') haha :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Avery i love seeing the lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/8/2021 6:59:00 AM

Wow! Superb penning! Great imagery and message! Another win coming your way. Congratulations in advance.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2021 8:30:00 AM

thanks Rama, i have tried 4 times to post this comment on your latest poem but keep getting system 500 error. 'superb alliteration and i love that final line Rama!' I will keep trying to post the comment on your poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/8/2021 4:06:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem on nature... Loved reading it... Thanks for sharing...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2021 11:27:00 PM

I always find it incredible that persons should be so dirty that they abuse our wonderful earth, Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Victor it is tragic the way man is destroying what mother nature has provided:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/7/2021 8:41:00 PM

Mother Earth needs someone to look after her, great contest entry, Jan~

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2021 6:15:00 PM

This comment is a bit off-topic, but... Check out pictures of the soon-to-be new Mayor of New York City, Eric Adams. Startling resemblance to the photo of Louis Armstrong above your poem. Woudn't have thought of it... :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:51:00 AM

wow there is a striking resemblence!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:50:00 AM

I will check it out,,, wonder if he can sing!:-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/7/2021 5:35:00 PM

Indeed... mother Earth... how beautiful she is... but not as good as you ... Always

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:52:00 AM

oh Pashang you make my spirits soar like a butterfly:-) hugs jan xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/7/2021 4:44:00 PM

Absolutely! Mother Nature does such a good job looking after us -- it is the least we can do. Excellent write! Oh, love Louis. An amateur drummer all my life, addicted to jazz, I have pounded out many a beat while listening to Mr. Armstrong's great recordings.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Joe i love the music of the era, now do swing dancing to 40s style music:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/7/2021 4:06:00 PM

Marvelous lines, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your little poem, and wish you the very best of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2021 3:04:00 PM

Hi Jan, What a great reminder to be good to our planet. Louis Amstrong’s “ Wonderful World” complemented your poem very well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/7/2021 2:51:00 PM

Jan's writing is wonderful; it spreads good feelings throughout, and the planet is in desperate need of more attention and care:) Blessings and warmest hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Lasaad:-) hugs Jan xx