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Wonderful World El

Please look after planet earth
cherish her for all she’s worth
Observe clouds in skies of blue,
cobwebs laced with morning dew
lambs gamboling in the fields 
beauty mother nature yields
Please look after planet earth!

Elemental Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Charles Messina

7 syllables per line checked with HMS

07/07/21

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2021

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Joanna Daniel Date: 8/1/2021 11:17:00 PM Back with my hearty congratulations, Jan:) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2021 11:27:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I also love the song. Thanks for adding. Have a blessed day with your win............... Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/31/2021 7:12:00 PM This is gorgeous. I LOVE IT. so amazing. God bless you always, and CONGRATS. love, Gina Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/31/2021 4:17:00 AM A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing! Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 7/31/2021 3:59:00 AM Wonderful poetry with a great message, Jan. I absolutely love this. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs // Charlie xx Login to Reply

Christopher Flaherty Date: 7/12/2021 2:20:00 PM Begging and pleading for what should in reality be patently obvious. You would think hey Jan. If things have to be explained surely the point becomes or is rendered irrelevant Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 7/11/2021 9:15:00 AM Nice Reading. Starting line is excellent. All the best Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/11/2021 8:33:00 AM OH WOW - A DEFINITE WIN FOR SURE. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/12/2021 12:58:00 AM A win is a bonus Jennifer, i hope the sponsor likes it, without these contest prompts so many poems would never be written:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/11/2021 4:34:00 AM Nice message, Jan:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon Date: 7/9/2021 5:54:00 PM Great message. It's the little things like "cobwebs laced with morning dew" that leave me in awe. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/12/2021 12:57:00 AM Thanks Juliet thats my fave line in the poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 7/8/2021 10:59:00 PM Perfect..... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:44:00 AM Thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/8/2021 9:07:00 PM You are such a nice soul very inspiring. You need not keep trying if you are getting error. Leave it and try later or soupmail. There was a problem in my poem, deleted and reposted. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care, Rama Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:45:00 AM I have managed to comment on it, it was so wonderful I wanted you to know:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/8/2021 5:25:00 PM WOW!!! This is filled with such a gifted and skilled vision and verse. I love it. God bless you with a win, Jan. Love, Gina Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 7/8/2021 11:50:00 AM The One Commandment of a Navajo is to, "Walk in beauty" which is increasingly difficult as tourists trash the roadside and everyone wears a facemask .....Best wishes for a win! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won Date: 7/8/2021 10:04:00 AM Nice entry, best of luck! (And I may have just learned the word 'gamboling') haha :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:47:00 AM Thanks Avery i love seeing the lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/8/2021 6:59:00 AM Wow! Superb penning! Great imagery and message! Another win coming your way. Congratulations in advance. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/8/2021 8:30:00 AM thanks Rama, i have tried 4 times to post this comment on your latest poem but keep getting system 500 error. 'superb alliteration and i love that final line Rama!' I will keep trying to post the comment on your poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan Date: 7/8/2021 4:06:00 AM Such a beautiful poem on nature... Loved reading it... Thanks for sharing... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:48:00 AM Thanks Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/7/2021 11:27:00 PM I always find it incredible that persons should be so dirty that they abuse our wonderful earth, Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM Thanks Victor it is tragic the way man is destroying what mother nature has provided:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/7/2021 8:41:00 PM Mother Earth needs someone to look after her, great contest entry, Jan~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/7/2021 6:15:00 PM This comment is a bit off-topic, but... Check out pictures of the soon-to-be new Mayor of New York City, Eric Adams. Startling resemblance to the photo of Louis Armstrong above your poem. Woudn't have thought of it... :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:51:00 AM wow there is a striking resemblence! Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:50:00 AM I will check it out,,, wonder if he can sing!:-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi Date: 7/7/2021 5:35:00 PM Indeed... mother Earth... how beautiful she is... but not as good as you ... Always Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:52:00 AM oh Pashang you make my spirits soar like a butterfly:-) hugs jan xx

Joe Dimino Date: 7/7/2021 4:44:00 PM Absolutely! Mother Nature does such a good job looking after us -- it is the least we can do. Excellent write! Oh, love Louis. An amateur drummer all my life, addicted to jazz, I have pounded out many a beat while listening to Mr. Armstrong's great recordings. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM Thanks Joe i love the music of the era, now do swing dancing to 40s style music:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/7/2021 4:06:00 PM Marvelous lines, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your little poem, and wish you the very best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:54:00 AM Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 7/7/2021 3:04:00 PM Hi Jan, What a great reminder to be good to our planet. Louis Amstrong’s “ Wonderful World” complemented your poem very well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:55:00 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet Date: 7/7/2021 2:51:00 PM Jan's writing is wonderful; it spreads good feelings throughout, and the planet is in desperate need of more attention and care:) Blessings and warmest hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2021 8:56:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Lasaad:-) hugs Jan xx

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