Jan Allison Poet Haiku

Wonderful World El

Please look after planet earth
cherish her for all she’s worth
Observe clouds in skies of blue,
cobwebs laced with morning dew
lambs gamboling in the fields 
beauty mother nature yields
Please look after planet earth!

Elemental Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Charles Messina

7 syllables per line checked with HMS

07/07/21

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Panagiota Romios August 5, 2021 at 11:27 PM Way late on this One Belated Kudos..... Pangie

Joanna Daniel August 1, 2021 at 11:17 PM Back with my hearty congratulations, Jan:)

Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2021 at 11:27 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I also love the song. Thanks for adding. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Regina Mcintosh July 31, 2021 at 7:12 PM This is gorgeous. I LOVE IT. so amazing. God bless you always, and CONGRATS. love, Gina

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:17 AM A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing!

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 3:59 AM Wonderful poetry with a great message, Jan. I absolutely love this. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs // Charlie xx

Christopher Flaherty July 12, 2021 at 2:20 PM Begging and pleading for what should in reality be patently obvious. You would think hey Jan. If things have to be explained surely the point becomes or is rendered irrelevant

Anisha Dutta July 11, 2021 at 9:15 AM Nice Reading. Starting line is excellent. All the best Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 12:58 AM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos July 11, 2021 at 8:33 AM OH WOW - A DEFINITE WIN FOR SURE. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER. Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 12:58 AM A win is a bonus Jennifer, i hope the sponsor likes it, without these contest prompts so many poems would never be written:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel July 11, 2021 at 4:34 AM Nice message, Jan:) Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 12:57 AM thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon July 9, 2021 at 5:54 PM Great message. It's the little things like "cobwebs laced with morning dew" that leave me in awe. Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 12:57 AM Thanks Juliet thats my fave line in the poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly July 8, 2021 at 10:59 PM Perfect..... Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:44 AM Thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian July 8, 2021 at 9:07 PM You are such a nice soul very inspiring. You need not keep trying if you are getting error. Leave it and try later or soupmail. There was a problem in my poem, deleted and reposted. Have a wonderful day ahead friend. Take care, Rama Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:45 AM I have managed to comment on it, it was so wonderful I wanted you to know:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh July 8, 2021 at 5:25 PM WOW!!! This is filled with such a gifted and skilled vision and verse. I love it. God bless you with a win, Jan. Love, Gina Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:46 AM Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta July 8, 2021 at 11:50 AM The One Commandment of a Navajo is to, "Walk in beauty" which is increasingly difficult as tourists trash the roadside and everyone wears a facemask .....Best wishes for a win! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:46 AM Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won July 8, 2021 at 10:04 AM Nice entry, best of luck! (And I may have just learned the word 'gamboling') haha :) Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:47 AM Thanks Avery i love seeing the lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian July 8, 2021 at 6:59 AM Wow! Superb penning! Great imagery and message! Another win coming your way. Congratulations in advance. Jan Allison July 8, 2021 at 8:30 AM thanks Rama, i have tried 4 times to post this comment on your latest poem but keep getting system 500 error. 'superb alliteration and i love that final line Rama!' I will keep trying to post the comment on your poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan July 8, 2021 at 4:06 AM Such a beautiful poem on nature... Loved reading it... Thanks for sharing... Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:48 AM Thanks Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar July 7, 2021 at 11:27 PM I always find it incredible that persons should be so dirty that they abuse our wonderful earth, Hugs. Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:49 AM Thanks Victor it is tragic the way man is destroying what mother nature has provided:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner July 7, 2021 at 8:41 PM Mother Earth needs someone to look after her, great contest entry, Jan~ Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:49 AM Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf July 7, 2021 at 6:15 PM This comment is a bit off-topic, but... Check out pictures of the soon-to-be new Mayor of New York City, Eric Adams. Startling resemblance to the photo of Louis Armstrong above your poem. Woudn't have thought of it... :) gw Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:51 AM wow there is a striking resemblence! Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:50 AM I will check it out,,, wonder if he can sing!:-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi July 7, 2021 at 5:35 PM Indeed... mother Earth... how beautiful she is... but not as good as you ... Always Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:52 AM oh Pashang you make my spirits soar like a butterfly:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph P. DiMino July 7, 2021 at 4:44 PM Absolutely! Mother Nature does such a good job looking after us -- it is the least we can do. Excellent write! Oh, love Louis. An amateur drummer all my life, addicted to jazz, I have pounded out many a beat while listening to Mr. Armstrong's great recordings. Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:54 AM Thanks Joe i love the music of the era, now do swing dancing to 40s style music:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins July 7, 2021 at 4:06 PM Marvelous lines, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your little poem, and wish you the very best of luck in the contest. Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:54 AM Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Panagiota Romios July 7, 2021 at 3:43 PM Best of luck! Jan Allison July 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM Thanks Pangie:-) hugs Jan xx

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