Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Wonderful Tonight - For Fun

With your beer belly bulging 
And your trousers far too tight
Your string vest showing 
Your shirt is no longer white 

Oh my darling you don’t look wonderful tonight

Jan Allison
15th August 2014

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Maurice Yvonne August 16, 2014 at 2:37 PM as long as you still refer to him as darling all is well. so much said with such few words. well done, great read. Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 2:48 PM Thanks Maurice was just a fun write based on an Eric Clapton Title:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2014 at 12:15 PM - Exercise and less beer ...... :))) - Enjoy reading with a smile, Jan !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 12:20 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 16, 2014 at 12:11 PM Give him the boot! LOL. JK Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 12:13 PM LOL Just a fun write Mr Roboto :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jerry T Curtis August 16, 2014 at 7:05 AM Tell your Darling he has a twin in America, LOL..........me Jerry T Curtis August 16, 2014 at 7:08 AM I was just kidding, I don't wear on either Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 7:06 AM LOL It's NOT written about my hubby ...he doesn't wear a string vest! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 16, 2014 at 12:41 AM Truthful and Lovely Jan ! Loved ur write my friend ! Hv a great day! Jan Allison August 16, 2014 at 4:11 AM Thanks for the lovely comment as ever Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless August 15, 2014 at 5:18 PM HEY, HEY, it's tough to fit 250 lbs of handsome into a 200 lb sack. Jan Allison August 15, 2014 at 5:26 PM LOL that made me chuckle John! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 15, 2014 at 4:58 PM HAHAHAAH oh that is too funny! I love it! Jan Allison August 15, 2014 at 5:02 PM Thought you would like it Casarah - that's two poems with Clapton titles tonight LOL Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 15, 2014 at 4:48 PM hehe....now that's Clapton...oh my darling you look wonderful tonight :) hugs Tim Jan Allison August 15, 2014 at 4:50 PM Thought you would appreciate the humour in this one glad you are the first to read it my friend:-) xx Jan Allison August 15, 2014 at 4:49 PM Oh Tim you say the sweetest things LOL - love that track too:-) Hugs Jan xxx