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Wonderful Tonight - For Fun

With your beer belly bulging 
And your trousers far too tight
Your string vest showing 
Your shirt is no longer white 

Oh my darling you don’t look wonderful tonight

Jan Allison
15th August 2014

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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Maurice Yvonne Date: 8/16/2014 2:37:00 PM as long as you still refer to him as darling all is well. so much said with such few words. well done, great read. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 2:48:00 PM Thanks Maurice was just a fun write based on an Eric Clapton Title:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2014 12:15:00 PM - Exercise and less beer ...... :))) - Enjoy reading with a smile, Jan !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 12:20:00 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/16/2014 12:11:00 PM Give him the boot! LOL. JK Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 12:13:00 PM LOL Just a fun write Mr Roboto :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jerry T Curtis Date: 8/16/2014 7:05:00 AM Tell your Darling he has a twin in America, LOL..........me Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 8/16/2014 7:08:00 AM I was just kidding, I don't wear on either Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 7:06:00 AM LOL It's NOT written about my hubby ...he doesn't wear a string vest! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/16/2014 12:41:00 AM Truthful and Lovely Jan ! Loved ur write my friend ! Hv a great day! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 4:11:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment as ever Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless Date: 8/15/2014 5:18:00 PM HEY, HEY, it's tough to fit 250 lbs of handsome into a 200 lb sack. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2014 5:26:00 PM LOL that made me chuckle John! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance Date: 8/15/2014 4:58:00 PM HAHAHAAH oh that is too funny! I love it! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2014 5:02:00 PM Thought you would like it Casarah - that's two poems with Clapton titles tonight LOL Jan xxx

Tim Smith Date: 8/15/2014 4:48:00 PM hehe....now that's Clapton...oh my darling you look wonderful tonight :) hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2014 4:50:00 PM Thought you would appreciate the humour in this one glad you are the first to read it my friend:-) xx Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2014 4:49:00 PM Oh Tim you say the sweetest things LOL - love that track too:-) Hugs Jan xxx