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Wonder and Lust

Sexy fun salty sweet Swish, dip, whip and roll, Love to take a south bound stroll. Sticky dripping goo, Uh oh; those look very blue, Enjoy a protein shake? Friends first, Virtue and chaste, It's ok to wait. Smooth as silk, Or bear skin rug... Matters of personal design. So much praise, Between crying sobs... Worship of the fleshly gods!

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Date: 1/30/2014 3:36:00 PM
Very intriguing poem, Amanda. Deep expression through your great imagery. I'm very interested in reading your future work, I'm sure it will be just as great. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:34:00 PM
Amanda, very loving poem, good contrast between the stanzas and use of form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Amanda Reslink
Date: 1/30/2014 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for hosting the contest it was a nice challenge for writing :)