Wonder About Walmart

Plumbing problems in several a nightmare,
closing stores for 6 months which is rare,
gutting them out,
security abound,
shoppers unprepared and downright scared.








11-21-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hauser  Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 9:55 AM
You really do have this limerick thing down! Nice!
Hoffman Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thanks so much Mike!:)
Flats Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 8:58 AM
I'm glad you gave us the scoop//on what happens to Walmart poop//improper drain//Walmart's gain//employees are out of the loop. Hadda google the story. Building code violations or employee relation manipulations? Who "nose?" smiles and smooth sailing! ~ john
Hoffman Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Hey John; but 6 months or more to fix the plumbing; thats whats got a lot of peoples suspicions humming! Thanks for your witty feedback about the scoop on the poop, lol!:)
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