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Lady's I ask permission can I speak of my troubles Men I can not help you cause all you do is betray me But Lady's I can relate too Because I can feel their heartbreaks They are the best thing that ever happened And most men take their presence here for granted But me I'm not like that No, that wouldn't be a wise choice to follow them But tell me is it really true Do all of you really search for that someone special I don't know that's why I'm asking Because to be honest you've lost me I want to understand Because its a lot of work to find out if you really like me The word Love has been cheapened It has lost its value It has has really reached in and struck me It has really been bleached by my failures The whitest lies are like blows to my conscience I repeat this cycle over and over Man get off this, this is not for you Women listen close There is a good man for you I admire your strength and courage When I hear your voice it makes me happy When I sit alone I think about what did they tell her I wonder as I watch a star falling in the night dying in glory I see flowers and its fall Im thinking what kind I should get my mother and daughter Because those are the women that mean most in life to me And I'll let them pick her And I'll know her when I see her So if you Lady's come across one Who is not like the rest and others Keep coming back because he may desire you Because I assure you he wont wait forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/8/2013 10:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Very nice poem
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Date: 6/5/2013 3:07:00 PM
I think I tend to agree with you... At least you are on the right track.... Congrats on a great win..... Jake
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:17:00 AM
this truly is beautiful. Glad to have seen it on this winners list. Congrats and I want you to know I can feel your love for your mother and daughter.
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:00:00 AM
- A winning poem! .... Beautiful! - Deserved really a good place on the winning list! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hello Timothy, :-) Congratulations with your beautiful poem. many different ways one can express the beauty of life. Thank you for everything. Goodnight * Linda
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your writing with us Timothy. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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