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Lady's I ask permission can I speak of my troubles
Men I can not help you cause all you do is betray me
But Lady's I can relate too
Because I can feel their heartbreaks
They are the best thing that ever happened
And most men take their presence here for granted
But me I'm not like that
No, that wouldn't be a wise choice to follow them
But tell me is it really true
Do all of you really search for that someone special
I don't know that's why I'm asking
Because to be honest you've lost me
I want to understand 
Because its a lot of work to find out if you really like me
The word Love has been cheapened
It has lost its value
It has has really reached in and struck me
It has really been bleached by my failures 
The whitest lies are like blows to my conscience 
I repeat this cycle over and over
Man get off this, this is not for you
Women listen close
There is a good man for you
I admire your strength and courage 
When I hear your voice it makes me happy
When I sit alone I think about what did they tell her
I wonder as I watch a star falling in the night dying in glory
I see flowers and its fall
Im thinking what kind I should get my mother and daughter
Because those are the women that mean most in life to me
And I'll let them pick her
And I'll know her when I see her
So if you Lady's come across one 
Who is not like the rest and others
Keep coming back because he may desire you
Because I assure you he wont wait forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/8/2013 10:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Very nice poem
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Date: 6/5/2013 3:07:00 PM
I think I tend to agree with you... At least you are on the right track.... Congrats on a great win..... Jake
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:17:00 AM
this truly is beautiful. Glad to have seen it on this winners list. Congrats and I want you to know I can feel your love for your mother and daughter.
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:00:00 AM
- A winning poem! .... Beautiful! - Deserved really a good place on the winning list! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hello Timothy, :-) Congratulations with your beautiful poem. many different ways one can express the beauty of life. Thank you for everything. Goodnight * Linda
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your writing with us Timothy. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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