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Women of Wood

Women of Wood My high school teachers were like chairs, women of wood, no human cares. Lasting through decades of wear their necks were long with hardened stares from chalk like faces with silver hair. Backs and spines precision straight sturdy legs that bore the weight of heavy ideas, out of date. We prayed retirement was their fate. They never ever would sit down a bulwark fastened to the ground, with glassy eyes that scanned around. Like oak they stood so firm and strong, with hardened hearts to chastise wrong. Soon to be hewn by saws of time. My high school teachers were like chairs. Backs and spines precision straight. They never ever would sit down. Like oak they stood so firm and strong. Soon to be hewn by saws of time. 1/27/18 MINUANETTA - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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Date: 4/29/2018 3:57:00 PM
Such great metaphor in your write, Sian. I experienced some of these 'chairs' and I know what you mean for sure. I really like your 'outside the box' theme and how you've used the form so well. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:51:00 PM
This is extraordinarily unique and substantive, Sian, and the metaphor and imagery you use to express chremamorphism, flawless! The rhyme and rhythm are superb and the subject matter so unexpected and original - I adore this write, and it brought back many memories! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-) <3
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! A wonder minuanetta.
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:04:00 AM
A lovely write, Sian. Congrats on your win... We must have gone to the same school!
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