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First time post. It's oh-so right to think. I left cause I assume. You think, just cause you drink, I'd assume a private room. But maybe, baby, I'm different. Something you can't expect. And maybe, I'd like you more, if you had some self-respect. Self-esteem, a woman's dream, its easy to detect. It's a mirror to yourself, an I just watch how you reflect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2011 2:00:00 PM
Clever, and introspective work, Clarence. This may influence the young ones to be the best they can be as they reflect just who they are. Enjoyed... Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:12:00 PM
Some decent wording and rhyming here.
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:20:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:47:00 PM
Very nice first post, William. Keep at it. You are doing great!!!
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