Women Around Here

First time post. 



It's oh-so right to think. I left cause I assume. 
You think, just cause you drink, I'd assume a private room.
But maybe, baby, I'm different. Something you can't expect.
And maybe, I'd like you more, if you had some self-respect. 
Self-esteem, a woman's dream, its easy to detect. 
It's a mirror to yourself, an I just watch how you reflect.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Clever, and introspective work, Clarence. This may influence the young ones to be the best they can be as they reflect just who they are. Enjoyed... Always, Annalise
Pettit Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Some decent wording and rhyming here.
Anderson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Very nice first post, William. Keep at it. You are doing great!!!
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