Women

A gift from God holding the right side of man one companion blushing Heaven's sky sweet rose From the garden of Eden under a tree branches spring fountain of youth you bore the fruit of our very existence Castles where built crowning your honor gracious queen is the mother womb of all life kneels Newborn empires rise and set with soft caring sunshine delivering us the seed to grow upon this earth From one rib joining hands to applaud our beginning held in two loving arms you made us all

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Kim Van Breda

Date: 3/12/2016 9:43:00 PM

Beautiful Liam.... ~~X~~

Pam Deremer

Date: 3/9/2016 4:09:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem.

Kim Difford

Date: 3/8/2016 3:50:00 PM

Liam so! beautiful!!!, deeply! divine!, so! many spiritual truths beautifully! expressed!, I love, 'A gift from God holding the right side of man', 'caring sunshine', will stay with me. Suoer!, write

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/8/2016 2:22:00 PM

This poem is truly deserving of being POTD rather it is selected or not! ; )

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/8/2016 2:20:00 PM

Liam, we need two halves to make a whole and woman without man has an empty womb and an empty longing heart. Your poem sheds light on how much we need each other to be fulfilled in the most romantic, soulful and spiritual way.Your beautiful gift to all women will cause tears to flow from its beauty, as mine have. This poem is a treasure and a fave. #7++ Thank you my friend and blessings, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2016 1:07:00 PM

- Beautifully written on women's day, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 3/8/2016 12:15:00 PM

Beautiful

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/8/2016 11:25:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Very beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^