Women

A gift from God holding the right side of man 
one companion blushing Heaven's sky sweet rose 

From the garden of Eden under a tree branches spring 
fountain of youth you bore the fruit of our very existence 

Castles where built crowning your honor gracious 
queen is the mother womb of all life kneels 

Newborn empires rise and set with soft caring sunshine 
delivering us the seed to grow upon this earth 

From one rib joining hands to applaud our beginning 
held in two loving arms you made us all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/12/2016 9:43:00 PM
Beautiful Liam.... ~~X~~
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:09:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 3/8/2016 3:50:00 PM
Liam so! beautiful!!!, deeply! divine!, so! many spiritual truths beautifully! expressed!, I love, 'A gift from God holding the right side of man', 'caring sunshine', will stay with me. Suoer!, write
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Date: 3/8/2016 2:22:00 PM
This poem is truly deserving of being POTD rather it is selected or not! ; )
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Date: 3/8/2016 2:20:00 PM
Liam, we need two halves to make a whole and woman without man has an empty womb and an empty longing heart. Your poem sheds light on how much we need each other to be fulfilled in the most romantic, soulful and spiritual way.Your beautiful gift to all women will cause tears to flow from its beauty, as mine have. This poem is a treasure and a fave. #7++ Thank you my friend and blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:07:00 PM
- Beautifully written on women's day, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:25:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Very beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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