Womb Man

Woman, discarded remnant of Adam?
Fe-male, not to be given her own name;
her own identity, other than, a part?

Receptacles, empty bowls, hollow holes,
to be filled only with necessary roles?

Necessary for man.
Primero uno, cock of the walk,
strutting, scratching, with his third leg dangling.

Womb man, so they, the male God’s called her.

Earth Mother, heroine, holder of hearts and hands, 
no man, nomad, nurturer of new life;
from the warm, wet, darkness to the Light. 
Woman.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Outrageous Rhyme". Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Once again, a poem that speaks in your own unique and brilliant way..........and again, should have placed closer to to top. You are speaking for all women.... I'm glad to see a few men agree. :) Congrats !!
Fraser Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Many congratulations Deborah on your fine win in Catie's contest. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in Catie's contest with this brilliant piece of writing.. enjoy your very special honor today TEACH with luv.. and happy weekend...
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Debbie
Köhp Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 8:28 AM
This poem is amazing. I love the feeling of angst. Cast of those shackles! :D Nathaniel
Kelly Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Debbie !!! , What is all this ?? I nearly choked on my spare-rib ... Oops , must NOT mention Mrs. Adam !!! But hold-on , what about Xmas Eve and New years Eve ???? SEE ; 2 mentions !!! And who is this " chicken-walker" ?? . Perhaps I'll enter him in the school sports ( 3 legged race ) PS , I just checked in the Hen-House , the darned rooster has only 2 , same as the dish ,we had for lunch . As for the strutting ; I feel an itch coming-on !! Maybe ,it's the warm , wet , darkness ??? !!! ....
Mason Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 12:05 PM
What would they do with out us ... LOL ... awesome write here, Deborah ... my goodness you've have 5 in today!! So glad you're here at the Soup!!
Williams Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Hello Deborah, the time is coming, soon a resurgence of truth ( Wicca ) will return women to their rightful spiritual place in our civilizations iconography.... thank you so much for your comment Deborah
Higgins Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 5:58 AM
How incredible was that? I am so loving this amazing piece of art. This is filled with so much that it made my mind dazzle with admiration. Great write...truly wonderful!
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