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Woman In a Cloud

I watched a while on a summer's day, Above the field in which I lay: The clouds take form and assume their place, And in one I saw a face. A face obscure and yet familiar. What name that face? Twas sweet Delia! For one brief moment I saw her peer; I felt a subtle grayness near. That shade of gray between dream and sleep, When thoughts we think, but do not keep. I watched a while and in conscious thought, The elusive dream at last I caught.

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Date: 11/30/2008 6:59:00 AM
Ashley - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:31:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/8/2008 10:14:00 AM
Ashley - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2008 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem great flow! Laura
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Date: 7/29/2008 4:21:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations Ashley, on "Woman in a Cloud" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:22:00 AM
Very beautiful! Congratulations Ashley on being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/27/2008 8:30:00 PM
Excellent flow in this poem - a pleasure to read - congrats on being featured this week
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