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Wolfman

As the wolves continued to hunt in their pack There was nothing that they would lack They found a man who would join the nightly hunt Raiding the forests in their nightly jaunts No, fear did they seem to display Hunting at night and sleeping by day As each early morning sun would rose He would find himself in a crouched up pose It felt like he was living some strange, strange dream For his clothes were dirty and ripped at the seams for contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 3:17:00 PM
Scary stuff! Peace &Love Matthew Ansih
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Date: 12/11/2011 4:43:00 PM
Enjoyable read. You can almost see the wolfman movies before your eyes.
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Date: 12/5/2011 12:00:00 PM
Hmmmm Sounds like Mogli from Jungle Book. ;) Nice job here Phyllis with lots of good imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:08:00 PM
Phyllis,, hello how are you? I'm snooping..lol..i was wondering how Billies contest would play out...I really really want to try one..lol.. i bet he would have a kick if I join his contest... We all know how many of the poets here think I'm a pest... Anyways... this comment is very off track. But, i truly think you have a good image here... for a wolf-man... good luck in the contest... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/3/2011 11:09:00 AM
thanks for stopping by. I guess mine was not what he was looking for so will see if I try again. oh well next time. off to shop today as groceries are low and need to fill the fridge. Have a nice weekend. love phyl
Date: 12/2/2011 7:57:00 PM
Hi Phyl, this reminds me of the Mougli story I read as a kid that lived with wolves (I think). Interesting you would write about this, wonder where you got your inspiration. Nice one to read.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/3/2011 8:24:00 AM
no I sat and wrote this and I am not familiar with the Mougli story-tarazan and the apes yes
Date: 12/2/2011 11:59:00 AM
yes, it would seem like a strange dream to wake up in a forest that way! I don't know how you are doing this contest. It looked way too complicated for me. I hope this does well, sweetie!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/3/2011 11:06:00 AM
i had to look up what rhyme was for I thought what rhyme was is not. You need it to rhyme every 1st and 3rd and every 2nd and 4th. So what form did i write.

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