Get Your Premium Membership

Woebegone Love

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Image result for grief quotes

My one true love is sadly gone, a name upon stone I dwell on; oh, do you recall the chiffon, of my wedding dress in Bourgogne. The green park in France and the swan, since your death I have been withdrawn; yes, I am a girl woebegone, and I dream all the night 'till dawn. Oh, why is the grass like a lawn; your name etched in cold stone upon. I visit when the flowers bloom, and bring red roses to your tomb; I love the scent of their perfume, oh, rest in peace, my love, my groom. And though lovely warm- I am gloom, I wilt like a flower of doom; a bird sings- then grief I resume, falling is a white feather plume. And the baby stirs in my womb; a place waits- a nursery room. I come when the leaves have gone dry, and wind is making the trees sigh; above clouds dance in the Fall sky, it seems my long hair wants to fly. I sang such a sweet lullaby, when our son had to say goodbye; I see him as a butterfly, oh, I ask God why, why, why, why! For what reason must baby die; never- do I get a reply. I come when snow has fallen white, the snowflakes giving me delight; though my coat warm- the cold does bite, a gust takes my scarf on a flight. I see your tomb- your name not quite, oh, I still dream of you at night; will enjoy my Christmas despite, I am so tired of the long fight. Keeping you in my mind and sight; I think you are in the starlight. I come when all is green neon, darling- time for me to move on; I have swept my tears with a broom, my mask- happy girl all assume. Flowers your tomb will beautify, I plant you violets and cry; my future darling will be bright, for of my life I now write, write. And I am finding my own way; still hard w i t h o u t you in my day. ________________________________ October 9, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Woebegone Love Copyright Protected, ID 19-1187-420-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, “Ludix-Rym” sponsor, Lu Loo First Place *Bourgogne is a region in France near Paris famous for wine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/8/2019 8:24:00 AM
A fave for me, Constance. I weep for your heartbreak, rejoice at your bravery, and exhalt at the imagery in your Poem! Congratulations, sweet one!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2019 8:41:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment and the FAV !
Date: 11/8/2019 4:37:00 AM
wow great rhythm and rhyme- and 8 syllables! yay, great job, I am so bummed more people did not try this form! You always tug at my heartstrings which is why I adore you so much. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR PLACEMENT AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST. x:)-luloo
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2019 8:43:00 PM
Lu, thanks for the compliment on my poem. Not sure why poets did not want to try this beautiful contest, a wonderful challenge in my opinion and thank you for the inspiration and my great placement !
Date: 10/14/2019 6:14:00 PM
This is so full of heartbreak, but tenderly written, I do hope you can find some relief through your poetry-
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2019 10:45:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for visiting and for your compassion, writing is very healing for me, I just need to put my emotions on paper ~
Date: 10/9/2019 10:30:00 PM
This is a extraordinary write and I'm sure it will be a winner in the contest. I enjoyed it so much... so sad, yet enchanting. Bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/13/2019 6:49:00 PM
Gina, thank for the extraordinary, I like that word !

Book: Reflection on the Important Things