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Without You One Liner Contest

You broke my heart left it in tatters, now you’re gone nothing else matters.

One of my favourite songs – Without You By Harry Nilsson
Contest:
Sponsor: Silent One

12~13~15

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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Vladislav Raven Date: 1/10/2016 7:25:00 PM What does one say Jan, you have knocked the nail write on the head with this one. One line, you know me, takes me twenty lines just to say hello. Know way i could do one line. Much belated congrats Jan. Hugs....Vladislav. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/11/2016 1:45:00 AM Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi Date: 12/16/2015 4:40:00 AM Hi Jan, congrats on your big win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/17/2015 1:00:00 AM Thanks Grace:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy Date: 12/15/2015 7:23:00 AM Congrats on the great win Jan... love, Rahy Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2015 7:38:00 AM thanks Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A Date: 12/14/2015 10:46:00 PM Jan, Congratulations on your One Liner #7 win. **SKAT** Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2015 1:05:00 AM Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 12/14/2015 5:52:00 PM An excellent one liner, Jan; it also boasts of internal rhyme! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2015 1:04:00 AM Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/14/2015 1:06:00 AM Liked this one! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM Cheers me dear:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak Date: 12/13/2015 11:08:00 PM Nicely done, Jan. I like the rhymes, too! Kudos on the win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM Thanks Dan:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/13/2015 7:02:00 PM wonderful, Jan!!a well deserved win, and this is a favorite song of mine as well. did you ever hear the original version from like the '80's? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM Thanks Andrea - I thought this was the original version by Nilsson will have to check it out now:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 12/13/2015 6:37:00 PM Very nice, Jan, and it rhymes too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2015 1:23:00 AM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless Date: 12/13/2015 5:15:00 PM ...and with a rhyme to boot.....good job Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 5:17:00 PM Thanks John I really enjoyed this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 12/13/2015 5:06:00 PM Congratulations of the placement of the contest Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 5:11:00 PM Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 12/13/2015 4:34:00 PM Congrats on a great win Jan.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 4:55:00 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn Date: 12/13/2015 3:25:00 PM congrats Jan...this is sadly wonderful! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 3:28:00 PM Thanks David it is a truly beautiful song .. unless Mariah Carey sings it! Hugs Jan xx

David Fisher Date: 12/13/2015 3:11:00 PM Well done, Jan! Love your one liner. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 3:14:00 PM Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton Date: 12/13/2015 1:57:00 PM Great song Jan lots of memories with this one, nice rhyme. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 2:03:00 PM Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie Date: 12/13/2015 12:17:00 PM when the heart is broken....no word nor token....can bring comfort or end the stress....because only time can heal the emotional mess....Love it jan....;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 12:24:00 PM Thanks Eric I always love your rhyming comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 12/13/2015 12:15:00 PM Great song and poem Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 12:24:00 PM Thanks Tim it is an awesome epic song:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/13/2015 9:42:00 AM Sad but poignant. A Fav! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 11:49:00 AM I have many favourite tracks Armand but this one is a wonderful lyric - sadly the song was 'ruined' by Mariah Carey... you can't beat the original:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 12/13/2015 8:48:00 AM Jan, you have penned a good one liner. It compliments the song perfectly. Nice rhyme as well. Good job! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2015 11:48:00 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx