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Without You One Liner Contest

You broke my heart left it in tatters, now you’re gone nothing else matters.

One of my favourite songs – Without You By Harry Nilsson
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Sponsor: Silent One

12~13~15

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Vladislav Raven January 10, 2016 at 7:25 PM What does one say Jan, you have knocked the nail write on the head with this one. One line, you know me, takes me twenty lines just to say hello. Know way i could do one line. Much belated congrats Jan. Hugs....Vladislav. Jan Allison January 11, 2016 at 1:45 AM Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi December 16, 2015 at 4:40 AM Hi Jan, congrats on your big win! Jan Allison December 17, 2015 at 1:00 AM Thanks Grace:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy December 15, 2015 at 7:23 AM Congrats on the great win Jan... love, Rahy Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 7:38 AM thanks Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 14, 2015 at 10:46 PM Jan, Congratulations on your One Liner #7 win. **SKAT** Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 1:05 AM Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 14, 2015 at 5:52 PM An excellent one liner, Jan; it also boasts of internal rhyme! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 1:04 AM Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 14, 2015 at 1:06 AM Liked this one! Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 1:24 AM Cheers me dear:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak December 13, 2015 at 11:08 PM Nicely done, Jan. I like the rhymes, too! Kudos on the win. Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 1:24 AM Thanks Dan:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 13, 2015 at 7:02 PM wonderful, Jan!!a well deserved win, and this is a favorite song of mine as well. did you ever hear the original version from like the '80's? Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 1:24 AM Thanks Andrea - I thought this was the original version by Nilsson will have to check it out now:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight December 13, 2015 at 6:37 PM Very nice, Jan, and it rhymes too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 1:23 AM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless December 13, 2015 at 5:15 PM ...and with a rhyme to boot.....good job Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 5:17 PM Thanks John I really enjoyed this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 13, 2015 at 5:06 PM Congratulations of the placement of the contest Jan. Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 5:11 PM Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May December 13, 2015 at 4:34 PM Congrats on a great win Jan.. Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 4:55 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn December 13, 2015 at 3:25 PM congrats Jan...this is sadly wonderful! Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thanks David it is a truly beautiful song .. unless Mariah Carey sings it! Hugs Jan xx

David Fisher December 13, 2015 at 3:11 PM Well done, Jan! Love your one liner. Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 3:14 PM Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton December 13, 2015 at 1:57 PM Great song Jan lots of memories with this one, nice rhyme. Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 2:03 PM Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie December 13, 2015 at 12:17 PM when the heart is broken....no word nor token....can bring comfort or end the stress....because only time can heal the emotional mess....Love it jan....;) Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thanks Eric I always love your rhyming comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith December 13, 2015 at 12:15 PM Great song and poem Jan Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thanks Tim it is an awesome epic song:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne December 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM Sad but poignant. A Fav! Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 11:49 AM I have many favourite tracks Armand but this one is a wonderful lyric - sadly the song was 'ruined' by Mariah Carey... you can't beat the original:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. December 13, 2015 at 8:48 AM Jan, you have penned a good one liner. It compliments the song perfectly. Nice rhyme as well. Good job! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison December 13, 2015 at 11:48 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx