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Without You

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no regrets, face sad my future without you, reality, facing myself, living start again, walk must I alone, fast flowing tears so river like, melting is heart of ice free and alone now
re-written 09/8/2016 reads : no regrets, face sad my, future without,you,reality facing myself, living start again, walk must I alone, fast flowing tears so river like, melting is heart of ice, free and alone now reverse: alone and free, ice of heart is melting like river, so tears flowing fast, alone I must walk, again start living myself, facing reality, you, without future, my sad face, regrets, no

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Date: 8/16/2016 8:20:00 PM
Congrats Seren!
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thank you....Seren
Date: 8/16/2016 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your place.Enjoyed reading.:) Sunita
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:51:00 PM
Sunita many thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed it...Seren
Date: 8/16/2016 11:25:00 AM
Seren, a lovely poem and wonderful flow...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:51:00 PM
Laua Loo what else you going to torture us with....Thanks for everything....Seren
Date: 8/9/2016 8:25:00 PM
This was wonderful! Great poem, great read <333
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:53:00 PM
Thank you Michelle....Seren
Date: 8/8/2016 5:47:00 PM
lol...still using that time machine I see : ) ...I think Andrea borrowed it today as well...excellent ...maybe I will attempt one
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:54:00 PM
but of course why spoil a good thing...lol....Seren
Date: 8/8/2016 5:30:00 AM
Well done Seren a challenging form and you penned a superb poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:54:00 PM
thanks Jan .....Seren
Date: 8/8/2016 4:40:00 AM
Very clever, Seren. I havn't been able to get one of these to work yet. Barry.
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:55:00 PM
Hi Barry thanks for stopping by...Seren
Date: 8/7/2016 11:23:00 PM
I am a backwards thinker, so I get this one! :)
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Date: 8/8/2016 12:02:00 AM
Did original wrong had to rewrite it.... thx Seren

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