Without You

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no regrets, face sad my future without you, reality, facing myself, living start again, walk must I alone, fast flowing tears so river like, melting is heart of ice free and alone now
re-written 09/8/2016 reads : no regrets, face sad my, future without,you,reality facing myself, living start again, walk must I alone, fast flowing tears so river like, melting is heart of ice, free and alone now reverse: alone and free, ice of heart is melting like river, so tears flowing fast, alone I must walk, again start living myself, facing reality, you, without future, my sad face, regrets, no
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Vaso Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Congrats Seren!
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thank you....Seren
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Congrats on your place.Enjoyed reading.:) Sunita
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Sunita many thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed it...Seren
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Seren, a lovely poem and wonderful flow...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Laua Loo what else you going to torture us with....Thanks for everything....Seren
Corbin Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 8:25 PM
This was wonderful! Great poem, great read <333
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Thank you Michelle....Seren
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 5:47 PM
lol...still using that time machine I see : ) ...I think Andrea borrowed it today as well...excellent ...maybe I will attempt one
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:54 PM
but of course why spoil a good thing...lol....Seren
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Well done Seren a challenging form and you penned a superb poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:54 PM
thanks Jan .....Seren
Stebbings Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Very clever, Seren. I havn't been able to get one of these to work yet. Barry.
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Hi Barry thanks for stopping by...Seren
Vaso Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 11:23 PM
I am a backwards thinker, so I get this one! :)
Roberts Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Did original wrong had to rewrite it.... thx Seren
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