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Without You

Softly sunset goes, Coming now the blues Pining for your heart To be mine tonight. Dreams we‘ve woven A blissful life for us Sharing our sweet lovin’ With all its luscious lush Oh why is there leaving ‘tis so right to belong? This love is it wrong, ‘tis so strong. Oh my nights are cold, lonesome without you Lie I wake with thoughts of you, Musing till dawn for just you. While the waves soar Rushing to the shore Caressing the beach Kissing sandy tease; While leaves are dancing With the summer night breeze, It’s just my cold hands squeeze, Oh how I miss you so, darling. Coda: Your caresses I long for Life with you I yearn for Still weaving dream of us Still waiting for us oh oh 8.19.14 Craig Cornish' More Song Lyrics Contest 5th place Sing to the tune of Peter White's Life Story

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Date: 9/3/2014 5:40:00 PM
dreamy sad and beautiful!! Congrats for you win with this poignant poem.
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:48:00 AM
Lovely love melody of wanting n longings hija! Congrats on big win!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/2/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Dr. Upma! kind words from is always appreciated. God bless you!
Date: 9/2/2014 5:32:00 AM
Lovely poem love, congrats on the win, Luna
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Date: 9/1/2014 3:21:00 PM
beautiful, excellent write. congratulations on a well earned win.
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:54:00 PM
gorgeous imagery and very romantic Hija hugs
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:18:00 AM
beautiful, wonderful write. thank you. lots of love.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thanks, Maurice! God bless!

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