Without You

Softly sunset goes,
Coming now the blues
Pining for your heart
To be mine tonight.
Dreams we‘ve woven
A blissful life for us
Sharing our sweet lovin’
With all its luscious lush

Oh why is there leaving ‘tis so right to belong?
This love is it wrong, ‘tis so strong.
Oh my nights are cold, lonesome without you 
Lie I wake with thoughts of you,
Musing till dawn for just you.

While the waves soar
Rushing to the shore 
Caressing the beach 
Kissing sandy tease;
While leaves are dancing
With the summer night breeze,
It’s just my cold hands squeeze,  
Oh how I miss you so, darling.

Coda:
Your caresses I long for
Life with you I yearn for
Still weaving dream of us
Still waiting for us oh oh

8.19.14
Craig Cornish' More Song Lyrics Contest
5th place
Sing to the tune of Peter White's Life Story
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 5:40 PM
dreamy sad and beautiful!! Congrats for you win with this poignant poem.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Lovely love melody of wanting n longings hija! Congrats on big win!
De La Luna Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Thanks, Dr. Upma! kind words from is always appreciated. God bless you!
Mehta Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Lovely poem love, congrats on the win, Luna
Yvonne Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 3:21 PM
beautiful, excellent write. congratulations on a well earned win.
Hamilton Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:54 PM
gorgeous imagery and very romantic Hija hugs
Yvonne Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 6:18 AM
beautiful, wonderful write. thank you. lots of love.
De La Luna Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Thanks, Maurice! God bless!
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