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Without You

As a boat that loses its course sans your love there is no route , I am nobody, I am to be idle ... Without your angelic strength, I'm only a cold winter soul as someone who only knows hell and travel darkest wetland ... You are my finest illusion, you are the blood of my heart you are the lifeblood of my life .... Without you I am only agony, I'm a sad way without joy with no arrival, no departure...

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/19/2020 7:03:00 PM

Hello Aakas Poetry, I am confused are you talking about a boat in this poem,or something else?If something else what is it? Salute Darlene. Thank you. Peace and Love

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2020 5:50:00 PM

Alakas, thank you for explaining. your poem. Salute Darlene Xx

Alkas Poetry
Date: 2/20/2020 4:56:00 AM

Dear Darlene, the boat is used here in a metaphorical way ... means that I am that a lost boat without a route, sans love... poetry without figurative language is almost never poetry ... so use and abuse of metaphors, metonies, hyperboles and so on. It is the fulcrum of poetry ... salute. kisses alkas