without sound

You called me  Without a sound  My mind was calm  My heart was beating  My being was in longing  My feet were running  Until I arrived  I saw nothing  You were not there  You did not hear  What a cry  What a commotion  I was  A body in memory  A soul in the wind
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Agustin Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 5:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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August 27, 2026 at 2:11 AM
This poem beautifully captures the feeling of longing and the search for something that seems just out of reach. The imagery and emotions are vivid, conveying both hope and disappointment. Its emotional depth and evocative language are high-notch. Keep up the great work, and continue exploring these themes in your writing!
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