Without Me

I look up and see
What exactly life is like,
Without me.

A girl, another
Taking my spot
In the world.

Intertwined in
Arms of yours
I see her smile,
That smile of mine.

Like an icy pick
The kill is nice,
The kill is quick.

Like a dagger
Through my chest. 
Finally my time to rest
With your dagger
Through my chest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 27, 2010 at 4:01 PM
A write of betrayal and revenge >> nice piece Sienna >> James
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