Without Me

WITHOUT YOU

Without regrets, without looking back
If you read this do believe,
Life WITHOUT you is like the color black

SKAT
 2-23-10

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Andrea Dietrich

May 6, 2016 at 7:33 PM

Nice seeing this one again and finding out it had been featured just recently. Belated congrats on that. Soupmail.

Andrew Crisci

April 21, 2016 at 3:00 PM

Congratulations Linda on your poem being featured this week. I believe what you say in your verses: it's a powerful statement. Thanks for sharing it with us. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs, Andrew.

Jerry Bolton

April 21, 2016 at 10:00 AM

Ahhh . . . But there are some who love the color black . . .

Sharon Gulley

April 19, 2016 at 12:04 PM

A wonderful write Skat. I enjoyed this. Congrats on being featured. Sharon : )

Daver Austin

April 18, 2016 at 2:08 PM

Love this secret message. Congrats on the selection. daver

Beautiful Scars

November 14, 2015 at 12:18 PM

I'll tell you a sweet little secret..You are my favorite poet on PS..Keep writing for all of us because your poems are beautiful by nature. It just comes so natural for you. God Bless :) -LU

Paul Callus

June 30, 2015 at 3:13 PM

I'm glad you're not perfect, Skat...that would put me off:) But you have a lot of positive things to offer, amongst them friendship and laughter! Yes, life without you would be colour black!!! hugs // paul

Skat A

May 27, 2015 at 6:50 PM

.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. .......

Skat A

May 27, 2015 at 6:49 PM

so terrible, what was i thinking

Beejadhur Sewumber

May 7, 2015 at 5:43 PM

life WITHOUT LOVED ONES is surely painful not for the writer who suffers the bulk but also those left behind. A nice theme with a purpose!

Afolabi Muideen

May 4, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Without doubt, you are right. Great work.

Aarushi Pandey

May 3, 2015 at 3:55 AM

Hey SKAT :) me, aarushi, you can call me ashi:) your are just fab iread your one single poem and you became my favourite poet. I am a very new writer and i am a student of 10th is really good to know that you did like my LET ME FLY keep loving my poems and keep reading it thank you, love u aarushi:)

Alice Umlah

January 29, 2014 at 11:36 AM

awesome poem!!

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 12:20 AM

yes! :-)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

October 15, 2010 at 10:18 AM

SKAT, SKAT, SKAT. Now I know you I definately cannot live without you. firstly, you are a good friend, you have a sweet personality, and you give me my poetry fix. So I give it to me

David Smalling

September 29, 2010 at 9:25 AM

I love your fresh pragmatic writes so much ... and this poem just show all why

Audrey Castaneda

April 9, 2010 at 10:38 PM

ur brothers favorite.... the poem says it all abt him & i we miss u dearly...... there is an empty hole in all of our hearts us w/out a sister & our kids w/out their cousins. please we beg of u lets try again...... u have left ur last name in our hearts....(HOLE):(

Dean Masciarelli

March 3, 2010 at 8:17 AM

Part # 2 By the way thank you for your comment and critique on the last poem that I had written,Please have a wonderful day today and keep writing because it allows the inner layers of your heart to shine through, God bless you always, Dean

Dean Masciarelli

March 3, 2010 at 8:16 AM

Part # 1 Irma if you weren't here you would truly be missed by so many people who appreciate you for all that you are and more because people care about you just like I do, and even though I may not know you that well I can tell that you honestly have a beautiful heart and soul Thank you for letting me see through your eyes today because it allowed me to go on a pleasant journey with you. ( To be continued )