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Without Dreams

An infinite scourging desert life would be An endless journey into reality and schemes, Without oases, where we could rest and cool If wouldn't have had the chance to make dreams* © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 SEPTEMBER 2014 *Inspired by Eileen Manassian’s poem,A DREAM WITHIN REALITY. And the comment I made: Without dreams ,life would be an endless journey on an infinite scourging desert, without ever finding an oasis to rest for to carry on your voyage!

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/6/2014 9:23:00 PM

Great write my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2014 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, Maurice! You are gracious!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/5/2014 8:16:00 PM

i agree with you, demetrios and i love the way you've expressed this...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/6/2014 9:03:00 AM

Ilene, my dear, thank you so much for visiting and commenting!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/5/2014 10:58:00 AM

So, so beautiful. As always an amazing write. Have a blessed day... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2014 3:23:00 PM

Lucy, my friend, how nice to see you up and visiting! Thank you for your kind words!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2014 2:50:00 AM

My dear poet. What a wonderful write this is. Oh...how sweet is the oasis. How cool and refreshing. The oasis of dreams allures. I am touched by your write. Thank you for mentioning my name! Filakia

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2014 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, mikroula mou, for the inspiration and for your heartfelt comments. Keep dreaming, dear Eileen! Filakia!