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Written: August 26, 2023 Personification Of The Elements Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley ______________________________________________________________ I hear the echoes of a distant time, As wailing gnats embrace the wind chime, Their tiny wings are a symphony of sorrow In the winnowing winds—their cries borrow, For now, I am but a freshwater stream Trapped between valleys, a mere dream, But deep within my soul, a fire burns, A longing to break free—to bear my turns. I crave to be an ocean, wild and vast, Where waves crash and dreams are cast Touching continents with a powerful might Drawing them closer, day and night. My power is at its—height As the sun shines with all its might Air and water temperatures rise, Underneath—cerulean skies.   A swirl of water and air my power unleashed, Destroying all in my path—unappeased, With every twist and turn, chaos ensues As I revel in the destruction I choose. The cool air wafts off lakes so serene, Mixing with the heat above—creating a scene. The surface of the lakes, now disturbed, Ripples and rages, as if it were perturbed.   With furious eyes of fiery red, I unleash my wrath—filled with dread A tempest of fury—a dance of might Engulfing the world in a relentless fight No shelter can protect—no fortress can stand, Against the force of my wrath, so grand I tear through cities, leaving ruins behind. Leaving no trace of mercy for mankind.

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Date: 8/27/2023 5:29:00 AM
You gave form, and meaning to the elements-- that you so eloquently describe, Lasaad. A symphony of emotions in this personification!
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Date: 8/27/2023 3:33:00 AM
Your mastery of words to create poetic imagery is on a very high level. But it's the deep introspective that really stands our here. You take the reader on a journey and give an insight into your mind through your reflective and wise words... This is great personification and this rhymes so well..
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:40:00 AM
Just when i finish reading a masterpiece, you’ve blessed poetry soup, with another one, it’s almost surreal how gorgeous and eloquent your way with words is. I yearn to be an ocean vast deep and flowing with various blues too. I love the imagery, description diction, how you’ve articulated your poetic lines, and the depth of those alliterations. And your rhymes are my absolute fave: just brilliant . This is impeccable
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Date: 8/26/2023 8:46:00 PM
WOW!! Sotto, but what an epic poem! I love love it! My kind of story to read :) Definitely a fave for me. Oh just super marvelous!
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Date: 8/26/2023 6:02:00 PM
I lament for the stream trapped and unable to join the sea, and for the unleashed rage of the wind. You depict these elements in a way that before man disturbed their harmony and created global warming they were free to be as they should be. A wonderful, mindful poem, concerning and true and told with the magical words with the semblance of a great poet laureate of their day.
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