Sulyman Abdulmoomean Yitta Poet Free verse

Within the Ripping Soul

Within A ripping Soul
A feeling of loss in lore
Amidst the web of the whirling wind
On the eyes of the earth
Amidst the whirling wave
On the eyes of the seas

A soul emerging to grab
The edges of the complex world
It is growing and living in
To capture its entirety

The more it attempts
The more complex the word seems
That the ripping soul seems lost
Amidst thought about the whiling wind
Of the world

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Skat A January 12, 2016 at 12:05 PM Sulyma, I do hope to see you back this year. 2016

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 12:38 PM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Sulyman. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Skat A December 4, 2012 at 1:13 PM Sulyman, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your verse. a deep look that took my breath away. Good verse if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~