Within the Night

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the end begins with rhe title

we find when we fall into darkness their is always hope

when you see light can be defended in words

I bow to the word 
a servant of the honest truth 
secrecy is held in the eyes of the beholder 
not one single soul can relate to an individual's suffering 

To go against the church
is to go against God Himself 
to dishonour the Shrine of Justice 
filled with misery it cares no more 

Father it was never my intentions to offend You 
holding the cross forgive me my sins 

I will defend the truth until my last breath 
if it were to be condemned for being right 
when the time is getting shorter
that should be your dawning age of wisdom

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2019 7:49:00 AM

there is always a light to lead us out of the darkness, faith, love, hope all help pull us through...nice penning my friend :) hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/30/2019 6:55:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))A very beautiful, powerful poem filled of Faith,Light, devotion n' truth, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very heartfelt!I truly like it! Wonderfully expressed again like all your poetry!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)Just remember that we're all sinners,saved only by His grace!He forgives us all!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Remember the Lord is right there always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Always keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^