Within the Hour of Love

Within the hour of love a red poppy night 
a warrior prepped for dawning flight 
 no bullets no musket to his flank 
 just memories of wartime- rank 
 settled in his aureole, the light;

  
 no bullets no musket to his flank 
 just memories of wartime- rank 

 That final day the guards did still salute 
 dressed in uniform with lips of solid mute 
 they came to honor him the gent 
 who's trust they underwent 
 consentingly agreed a man of no refute; 

within the hour of twilight God found his heart,  
within the hour of love he got a fresh new start

No bullets, no musket to his flank....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed.
Rose  Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Susan for reading
Canerdy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Thought-provoking and well-written-- CONGRATS on your win, Pixie! Janice
Rose  Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you Janice for reading
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Well done, Pixie. Congrats on your top win.
Rose  Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you Line for reading
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