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Oh, shower me with your lyrical prose. Set it to reach my pores—life is on scale of rose Send me the light of a thousand stars. An eerie enigma lies below—what induced scars? Assuaging the senses with that charm. As royalty in a red silk gown—my heart is warm. Being lonesome is not a permanent state Despite what the body may lead us to hate,  We are on a road that leads to nowhere Yet, it provides continuous rebirth to bear   All we have are our words and memory  Friends and trip peers, heart as gentle be Feeling lonely is only a state of mind This is a factor one can cherish or find.  The vastness of the sky is still there.  A steady display of how we fit and share.
Written: May 24, 2023

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Date: 5/25/2023 4:28:00 PM
..wowza...'the sun in red silk..being-now-where we are continuous...(we've/weave) a... mind-sky....we fit'.....stan
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Date: 5/25/2023 1:54:00 PM
I agree...being lonely is a state of mind. A beautifully written poem. Sara Etgen-Baker
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Date: 5/25/2023 4:59:00 AM
shower me with your lyrical prose… life is on scale of rose… Send me the light of a thousand stars - beautiful beginnings!
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Date: 5/25/2023 12:14:00 AM
it is not the goal, that is important, but the travel, thanks for the beautiful message and true poetry,
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Date: 5/25/2023 12:14:00 AM
it is not the goal, that is important, but the travel, thanks for the beautiful message and true poetry,
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