Within My God's Fellowship

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Oh, my dear GOD: Thou art my Creator, and I’m Thy creation my soul thanks Thee for Thy eternal redemption offering Thy fellowship* of sweet heaven’s jubilation… Keep me abiding in Thy will set for my glorious transformation. Thou art my Potter, and I’m Thy clay my person praises Thee for designing me by Thy wondrous way shaping me according to Thy image to reflect Thy light everyday… Keep me as a clean vessel that honours Thee while in Thy plan I stay. Thou art my Master, and I’m Thy servant my heart trusts Thee and Thy immutable covenant bringing me into Thy work-partnership along Thy reward-grant… Keep me accomplishing with my best against worldliness and vanity-want. Thou art my Head, and I’m part of Thy body my human nature seeks Thy purging from sinfulness’ malady perfecting me in Thy wisdom by Thy Scriptures against parody… Keep me reaching-out to others as I wait for Thy coming, ever ready. Thou art my Leader, and I’m Thy follower my commitment yields to Thy command and order enabling me toward functional maturity, courageously bolder… Keep me praying steadfastly with the conviction of a truth defender. Thou art my vine and I’m among Thy branches my faith clings to Thy upholding amidst glitches nurturing me with Thy compassion that enriches… Keep me bearing fruits by Thy love, grace and mercy’s touches. Thou art my Shepherd and I’m Thy sheep my spirit exalts Thee for saving me from death-valley’s deep carrying me to Thy haven away from pride and selfishness’ heap… Keep me needing Thee constantly, from the time I awake till eyes sleep. Yes, my dear God! *Ephesians 3:9 And to make all men see what is the fellowship of the mystery, which from the beginning of the world hath been hid in God, who created all things by Jesus Christ. July 8, 2021 Dramatic Monologue in Rhyme 2nd place, "Tat Tvam Asi" Poetry Writing Premier Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker; judged on 8/1/2021.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2021 11:20:00 PM

This is an awesome prayer, Beata, shows the depth of your faith, congratulations:)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/1/2021 6:42:00 AM

Wonderfully written dramatic monologue in rhyme. Intimacy with the Almighty is beautifully brought out. Congratulations on your win!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/1/2021 2:39:00 AM

Thank you for participating in the contest, Beata and congrats on your win, with this outstanding prayerful poem!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/8/2021 5:13:00 PM

This is brilliant and breathtaking, dear friend. I simply love it :) Thank you for sharing your heart with adoration for the Lord. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/8/2021 12:14:00 PM

Great inspiring piece Beata, with lovely rhyme and flow showing God as our great saviour and Lord. Have a blessed happy day, Gordon

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/8/2021 9:21:00 AM

A superb poem, Beata, your language is flawless, flowing seamlessly with outstanding imagery and perfect description. Nothing better than praising God to feel the internal heal.