Within His Her Eyes

He look her in the eyes like river flowing 
to the end of the rainbow 
Within his eyes to her eyes is like magic that multiply
like passion on top of mountain top her heart
screaming 
you can hear her heart beat echoing in the distance
Within his eyes to her eyes is like a halo glowing in the distance 
shining down on our love
our eyes is wondering into each other soul like
a loin looking for his prey with passion
Within his eyes to her eyes is making colorful communication like 
the ocean communicate with the heavenly rim
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Asuncion Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Eyes are a barometer of emotion.... Congrats for being featured..
Jackson Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Thank you Bernard I'm in tears because I took a chance putting my work and thoughts out to the masses in the response is amazing. I'm grateful for poetry soup community. The love and support is marvelous. You right the eyes are the most priceless feature on a human. blessings and love
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:18 PM
- A great first poem, Patrice :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup - hugs from Norway // Sun :)
Jackson Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much Sunshine Smile. I'm humble for your response. Blessings to you
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