Joseph May Poet Rhyme

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Within Her Song

Her musical style may have been avant - garde
  But her sad songs left ennui emotions and hearts scarred

 When she found herself within the lyrics of her song
 Her romantic elan diminished before long 

 She had given him carte blanche to her heart
 But soon, a deja vu of broken dreams it did impart

 She thought that his love was bona fide
 But deep within an anomaly did reside

 A cacophony of musical notes echoed across baroque structures
 Where love's melody was but a dilettante allure
                              ~
 1-14-18
 Contest: Ten words ten lines
 Sponsor: Silent One

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Line Gauthier February 12, 2018 at 1:50 PM Congrats, Joseph. Well done.

Heidi Sands February 9, 2018 at 6:35 AM Congratulations Joseph for this poem being on the best new poem list 7.

Agnes Krampe January 31, 2018 at 8:38 PM Congrats on your win, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong January 31, 2018 at 2:06 AM A splendid creation with the words weaved in so beautifully Joseph! Congratulations on your win! : )

Viv Wigley January 30, 2018 at 1:18 AM A fine piece, Joseph, well done! Regards, Viv

Carole Duet January 29, 2018 at 8:24 PM Hi Joseph! I really like your poem and just wanted to say congrats on your placement in the contest too. :D

Susan Ashley January 29, 2018 at 8:15 PM Returning with congratulations Joseph, for your wonderful win with your amazing poem. ~Susan

Laura Leiser January 29, 2018 at 4:52 PM Lovely poem, Joseph! Congrats on your win :)

Silent One January 29, 2018 at 1:54 PM Great take on the contest Joseph.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Susan Ashley January 25, 2018 at 5:12 PM Beautiful rhythm and rhyme tells a deep, sad story of lost love Joseph. A wondrous write weaving the required words with ease. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Keith O.J. Hunt January 24, 2018 at 5:25 PM A wondrous song Joseph, enjoyed this musical post, best of luck in the contest;-)

FJ Thomas January 24, 2018 at 9:15 AM Perfectly intertwined with thoughts of the weeping willow Joseph. Beautifully written.

John Hamilton January 23, 2018 at 1:02 PM Wow Joseph I like the way you incorporated the ten words, they blended seamlessly, cacophony and baroque tough words, you're a brave man I never even tried this one, reads like a winner to me!

Maria Williams January 22, 2018 at 12:06 AM Wow, a beautiful song my friend Joseph, which you've coupled with a very appropriate image of the weeping willow. It is so sad for a woman facing this situation. Loved the way you crafted the poem. A FAVE from me ...Maria PS all the best in the contest.

John Fleming January 15, 2018 at 4:08 AM A job well done indeed, Joseph - excellent! My very best regards. :) john Joseph May January 15, 2018 at 8:34 AM Thank you John

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2018 at 6:14 PM wow, you showed great accomplishment in both meeting this challenge and also in doing it so quickly!! I can't even begin to think where to take my ideas with this one. Wonderful job, Joseph. Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 9:06 PM Thank you Andrea...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 1:55 PM - A lovely balance in this song, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 9:06 PM Thank you Anne..hugs

Vijay Pandit January 14, 2018 at 12:30 PM Well written Joseph..best for a win. Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 12:51 PM Thank you Vijay

Nette Onclaud January 14, 2018 at 12:23 PM i enjoyed the delicate rhythm of this piece, joseph.. very nice!..huggs Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 12:51 PM Thank you Nette

Heidi Sands January 14, 2018 at 9:10 AM Wow Joseph. A well written poem, this is. Powerful. Good luck in the contest :) Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 9:13 AM Thank you so much Heidi..Glad you like it