David Bose Poet Quatrain

Within Her Eyes

Within her eyes, once I lifted the veil,
Elation, I found, in shimmering tears,
A happiness vowing love would prevail,
And it has, indeed, through decades and years.


October 23, 2016
Brief Memories Contest
FJ Thomas

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Anna M Shepard September 24, 2018 at 4:15 PM Nothing is more beautiful than when a new bride looks into the eyes of her groom. True Love Endures.

Constance La France November 17, 2016 at 7:19 PM David congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~

Kay Roberts November 4, 2016 at 3:43 AM Very "Mushy", Dave. However, very beautiful too and my kind of thing.

Heidi Sands October 23, 2016 at 12:56 PM This is beautiful. :) David Bose October 23, 2016 at 7:21 PM I guess it's what I called "mushy" as a kid. Now I'll read it to her and see how far it gets me! Thanks, Heidi!