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Within Her Arms

Southern breezes serenade the canopy swaying the branches and tickling the leaves spilling light drops of splendor embracing me Liquid comfort consoling a fading breath again feeling alive securely within her arms fighting off a long drought in the face of death Fleeting the memories danced through the rain unguarded two souls were soaked in affection thoughts and touches one couldn't contain Joys shared together can never depart A moment but brief sits in this heart Brief memories contest by FJ Thomas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/18/2016 3:24:00 AM
Your poems soak in me in affection for you Tim, even when you laugh at my creep.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:10:00 PM
Tim this is wonderful and congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 11/17/2016 1:07:00 PM
This is beautiful, Tim...a delight to read. Congratulations on your very fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:15:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:05:00 PM
great Tim should go to the top...Seren
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:04:00 PM
"and tickling the leaves" beautiful. The last two lines blows it out of the park. A Fav!
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Date: 10/16/2016 9:47:00 PM
Hopefully one day brief will become a lifetime!
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Date: 10/16/2016 5:31:00 PM
Nicely said, a great big hug for you Tim.. ;)
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:18:00 PM
oh so so beautiful Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/16/2016 2:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan
Date: 10/16/2016 2:12:00 PM
Where do you get this stuff? Sometimes moments last a lifetime, Tim. Good luck my friend:)
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:18:00 PM
lol...Looking at the rain out my back window falling on the giant oak.
Date: 10/16/2016 12:30:00 PM
- Marvellous and beautiful, Tim - A pleasure to read - A 7 ! - I hope it will win in the contest, good luck - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thanks A-L...wishing you a wonderful new week.
Date: 10/16/2016 12:28:00 PM
Indeed brief beautiful moments you described..I so believe Flo is gonna love this ..A fave
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/16/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Charma...I do hope she likes this....have a great night : )

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