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Within Four Walls

I remember, I remember
To be displaced in South Beach Psych Isolation room
I, alone
Four empty walls 
Gloom
Otherworldly space most crude.

How would I chase woebegone state... seemed no use
Mouthing off, vexing psych's medicine man
Forthwith he summoned more mean hands.

Found myself in freezing room, so 
I had to take a stand 
Ranted some
Conjured up my very own plan
So sacred freedom would side with me. 

Eyes closed, I saw skylight with halcyon words of love
That tempered emptiness no one should ingest.
I knew I'd be energized with pose-
Scintilla of faith saw me on my knees 
Flexed; unraveling moves
I imagined summery cell
Soothing the better of me
Free from cravings for nicotine, you see
For quintessential to my soul, silence 
Dissolved gloomy empty walls
And I knew I would emerge fetching
Having warmed cold floors with soft might
That boost reserve. 

Need to outsmart the medicine man...
Breathe, carve a master plan.

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Entry for C.T. "Four Walls" poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duncan Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Awesome write. I had a friend back in the 90's who checked herself into a ward. I have Walls 2, Monsters. I really like the way you put your words. Congrats on your well-deserved win :)
A   Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Iris, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Linda. Have a wonderful day.
T  Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:12 AM
thank you
Carter Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:49 PM
I think good poetry makes a statement with eloquence, and this is a statement. Nice work!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 4:18 PM
appreciate u stopping by with your warmth, dear one.
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