Within a Day

do you ever question a day?
the way the sky blushes
crimson, pinkish-lavender 
or orange tones
yet the sun always rises
the same shade of bloody-red
above waves of crested seas

the way the clouds appear
sometimes as if delicately painted
with the tip of an artist's brush
yet other times puffy
like a cotton ball project
from elementary school
that hung on the fridge
it resembled nothing
but everyone took a guess
at what they thought they saw

the way the wind whispers
softly through trees
with leaves dancing
pirouetting down
then picking back up
floating in the breeze
yet other times it whips
through the trees
snapping branches
or knocking them down

the way the sea waves
sometimes gently kissing the sand
leaving little treasures
as it recedes back
with a relaxing ebb and flow
yet other times lashes out
in a violent rage
like a jealous lover
reclaims the sand
and leaves destruction
in its wake

do you ever question a day
before the edge of night falls
look around and wonder
or is it just me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 12:36 PM
No Sandy it's not just you, I think any sentient creature will look at the sky in wonder and awe, and feel that they see something!
Adams Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for your kind comment and input, those around me do not notice things as easily as i do! Glad others notice things too :) hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 5:34 AM
You are a fantastic writer, Sandra. Loved this so much. Especially this part: "like a cotton ball project from elementary school that hung on the fridge it resembled nothing but everyone took a guess at what they thought they saw" And no it is not just you.
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Thank you for the awesome compliment Caren :) Glad to know I am not alone! hugs
Mcconnell Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Such a lovely piece Sandra, great imagery and brings thoughts to make one ponder on each day's events. Nice one!
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 6:13 AM
Thank you Gordon....i always love reading poetry that makes me ponder thoughts so this was a nice compliment :) hugs
Michael Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Lovely imagery... used to question but now question the answers...Enjoyed it...All the best
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 6:12 AM
with my job i get to analyze the sky often...thank you! :)
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