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Withernwick - Trees

In the village where I was born There was always lots of trees. Especially those in the church yard, Gently swaying in the slightest breeze. I suppose there must have been times When those branches were storm thrashed And there must have been times When those branches split and smashed But, overhanging our cottage, Those giants to my child’s eyes Sent me to sleep With their whispers and sighs. Murmured to me all night long And woke me in the morning As they accompanied the chorus Of dawn bird song. I sheltered under those trees. Some carried my name Carved with my first knife, All boys had one then, Just a part of country life. I clung to those trunks as tightly As I would later cling to any lover As I scrambled up to try to look over The village, my world spread below I scrambled as high up as I dared go. Most of those trees like my family Are now dead and gone Those that are left shelter the graves So I can move on. I rarely go back now, I feel so alone, So I keep the village in my memories And let the village keep the bones. But, over the years It keeps calling to me My magical village of singing trees.

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Date: 3/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
very touching, terry! i especially love the line about letting "the village keep the bones."
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/15/2023 1:22:00 AM
Thanks ilene - i visit maybe once a year. The Old Trees were brought down because of Dutch Elm Disease, but the replacements are coning on
Date: 3/14/2023 11:40:00 AM
Along with Joyce Kilmer's iconic tribute to trees, I will add your poem, a more personal version to my list of great tree tributes, majestic! I'm going to fave it, Robert
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/15/2023 1:20:00 AM
Thanks Robert - am honoured and flattered by the comparison. I love that poem.
Date: 3/14/2023 8:35:00 AM
Love the nostagia in this poem, Terry. Easily relatable as we all have those childhood memories that refuse to be forgotten. Great poetry!
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/15/2023 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. I think we all retain a bit of child in us and the memories help so much
Date: 3/14/2023 4:07:00 AM
A fond memory, Terry. What is it about trees that brings us back to our childhood years? We had a single mimosa tree on our front yard. It always drew in the butterfies, countless days climbing that old beauty. Lovely poem. ~Charlie
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/14/2023 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Charlie. I think trees are so,E of the most beautiful things on this planet. Can imagine you, like me, climbing and having fun.
Date: 3/14/2023 2:48:00 AM
There are some beautiful pictures of the conservation area of Withernwick trees, and some sad ones of all the remains of the fallen ones. Must have been lovely to grow up around them Terry. A sentimental poem and a tribute to your childhood in remembrance of the Withernwick trees. I learn so much from your wonderful poems. I guess I am too old now, but I would love to have seen Hull.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/14/2023 6:30:00 AM
Have soup mailled you Wen

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