Eileen Manassian Poet Dramatic Monologue

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Withering Lows

you watch me WITHER
you watch ME wither
you WATCH me wither
YOU will watch me wither

YOU WATCH ME WITHER...

when YOU can WATER me with
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Paul Callus December 17, 2014 at 1:33 PM No, not withering, but blossoming...because a flower such as you will always be drenched in showers of love. hugs // paul Eileen Manassian December 18, 2014 at 3:42 AM This is a delight to read, Paul. I do need to be drenched....Soaked to the core. Thanks for this lovely visit.

Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2014 at 10:40 AM Inside you is an eternal spring so you will never wither! Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 11:04 AM Richard....You make me so happy with this post. I'm already starting to bloom. Thank you.

Justin Bordner December 16, 2014 at 8:55 PM I've always loved how you make a visual art with the style you write your poems with, theres a potent feminine spirit to the way you do it Eileen. Your beauty isn't meant to wither, only to flourish through the droughts and downpours of inscrutable love...I won't let you wither...J.A.B. Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 3:18 AM Justin...thank you for your visit and for the affirmation that my poetry speaks to you. You're one of my favorite people here. You are...and will always be. :) I see you as an eagle....flying strong and free. I hope you continue to soar, in your work, in your life, in your heart. I wish you every good thing...Thank you for watering this Desert Orchid. I'm refreshed.

Jan Allison December 16, 2014 at 2:40 PM SOOOOO creative Eileen its a 7 from me!!! hugs Jan xxx Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 3:21 AM :) Why thank you, Jan. :) How sweet of you. A seven is always a lovely treat for me. Hugs

David Meade December 16, 2014 at 1:05 PM I love the creativity in this poem -- I am very visual and the words danced and the images flooded my brain -- I love it -- a water can of love -- pour on it on me!! Outstanding my dear Little One!! Hugs. Eileen Manassian December 17, 2014 at 3:21 AM I love the visual aspects of your poems, David. I'm glad I was able to flood your brain with these simple lines. Thank you...for loving it. I'm glad I was able to refresh your soul. Little One is grateful for your visit. You boost my spirits.