Wither

Wither I will wither away Wither I will die today Wither This will be the end Wither My bones will grow thin Wither My body will be gone Wither My soul may still live on Wither Today is the day Wither I’ve been waiting for, so long.

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Crystol Woods

Date: 7/1/2024 4:57:00 PM

Hello Maxx! This is cleverly written! "Wither " denotes on going decay, entropy, a lack of order or predictability; gradual decline into disorder. I'm hoping this isn't a place you are emotionally... that this is just a beautiful poem not a letter? Thinking of you, praying your ok. Soupmail me if you need to talk. <3<3

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/24/2024 3:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.