With Your Voice

A winged angel's spirit floated on a soft breeze to flap it's wings causing a butterfly effect turning the softness of the breeze into a tornado twirling round and round unleashing my soul from its chrysalis to float upon the rotating furious columns of air freeing something inside of my chest making my heart beat faster....... all with just the sound of your voice bringing a smile to my lips Let me ride the wonderful chaos with this angel until I fall completely for you......
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Watt Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Brenda, I really enjoyed this free verse. "Let me ride / the wonderful chaos". So lovely, start to finish. Congrats on your #1 win ~ John
Chiri Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:09 AM
John so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!;)
Adiyoli Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations on your top win :)
Chiri Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:01 AM
Thank you!;)
Parker Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your win with this visual poem of heartfelt beauty
Chiri Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Frederic thank you !;)
Gaul Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Heartfelt spirituality separates this from most other love poems and the sound and fury imagery lifts the whole thing up to number one. Congrats on your skillful and high placement. And thanks for your comment on mine as well.
Chiri Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Greg thank you so much!;)
Fingon Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Nicely penned. It flows well.
Chiri Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Thank you Joan I appreciate that!;)
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 12:54 PM
So wonderful to see you at the TOP of #1 again Brenda--well done!
Chiri Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Thanks so much Vijay!;)
Neumann Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 11:02 AM
A wonderful image.
Chiri Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 11:56 PM
Thank you!;)
Fleming Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 2:49 PM
I know you are an undoubted and accomplished "Rhymer" of course...but sometimes I really do think you are even better at free verse -- lovely poetry, Miss Chiri! Hope you are in good spirits? With fondest thoughts. :) john
Chiri Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 11:58 PM
Ah John thank you my dear frind!;)
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:46 PM
- Brenda, I love your "butterfly effect ... " ... a lovely poem :) - Take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Sunshine thank u so much!;)
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