With You In Autumn Evening

The sweet songs of birds, We hand in hand across the lawn, Pansies white yellow and violet Tossing their heads in the breeze. Somewhere the sound of falling leaves. The sound of squirrel cracking the walnut. Calm weather warm sun, White fluffy clouds forming different shapes, A passenger flight in the blue sky, Sun born in the horizon and about to fade in the horizon, Both our heartbeats echo inside of chest, Shutting and opening of our lips, Your unkempt hair flying backwards, Yellowish west sky. Heart shaped fig leaf's shadow. If I could stop this world from spinning, I would do so, Just to be with you In this autumn evening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/9/2014 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations! Dear poet Bantawa.Well done.
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Date: 11/30/2014 4:35:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:34:00 PM
lovely write Congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/30/2014 10:29:00 AM
such beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:28:00 AM
OH, those sweet and lingering moments. great job Kiran, well deserved top of list.
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Date: 11/30/2014 7:05:00 AM
What a beautiful piece...congratulations Tim
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:54:00 AM
Hi Kiran, I just love everything about this poem, and after reading Andrea's comment, I believe so did she. Congratulations, on your #1 win. Have a nice one. SKAT
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:16:00 PM
this is the most beautiful poem of yours that I think I have ever read. A FAVE
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/16/2013 7:46:00 AM
I appreciate it, thanks for liking.
Date: 10/18/2013 11:26:00 AM
you make my heart sway with your dance of autumn gliding ever so softly, kiran..:) huggs
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:37:00 AM
you make my heart sway with your comment.. thank you nette.
Date: 10/18/2013 12:43:00 AM
This is some really, really great imagery! Good stuff!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:36:00 AM
thanks Emmie.
Date: 10/17/2013 6:58:00 AM
The images in this poem are amazing! And the ending is superb!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/18/2013 12:11:00 AM
thank you Monterey for liking and commenting
Date: 10/17/2013 4:04:00 AM
- Oh ... a beautiful poem .... like it very much, Kiran. :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/17/2013 7:11:00 AM
thanks Anne.
Date: 10/17/2013 2:59:00 AM
Nice romantic expressions of emotions of love, Kiran
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/17/2013 3:13:00 AM
thank you Dr. Ram
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