With You In Autumn Evening

The sweet songs of birds, We hand in hand across the lawn, Pansies white yellow and violet Tossing their heads in the breeze. Somewhere the sound of falling leaves. The sound of squirrel cracking the walnut. Calm weather warm sun, White fluffy clouds forming different shapes, A passenger flight in the blue sky, Sun born in the horizon and about to fade in the horizon, Both our heartbeats echo inside of chest, Shutting and opening of our lips, Your unkempt hair flying backwards, Yellowish west sky. Heart shaped fig leaf's shadow. If I could stop this world from spinning, I would do so, Just to be with you In this autumn evening.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thajudeen Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations! Dear poet Bantawa.Well done.
Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Hamilton Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:34 PM
lovely write Congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:29 AM
such beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan x
Lawless Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 8:28 AM
OH, those sweet and lingering moments. great job Kiran, well deserved top of list.
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 7:05 AM
What a beautiful piece...congratulations Tim
A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Hi Kiran, I just love everything about this poem, and after reading Andrea's comment, I believe so did she. Congratulations, on your #1 win. Have a nice one. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:16 PM
this is the most beautiful poem of yours that I think I have ever read. A FAVE
Bantawa Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:46 AM
I appreciate it, thanks for liking.
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:26 AM
you make my heart sway with your dance of autumn gliding ever so softly, kiran..:) huggs
Bantawa Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 11:37 AM
you make my heart sway with your comment.. thank you nette.
Ay Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:43 AM
This is some really, really great imagery! Good stuff!
Bantawa Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 11:36 AM
thanks Emmie.
Sirak Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 6:58 AM
The images in this poem are amazing! And the ending is superb!
Bantawa Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:11 AM
thank you Monterey for liking and commenting
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:04 AM
- Oh ... a beautiful poem .... like it very much, Kiran. :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bantawa Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 7:11 AM
thanks Anne.
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 2:59 AM
Nice romantic expressions of emotions of love, Kiran
Bantawa Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 3:13 AM
thank you Dr. Ram
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