With You

Every step i take
a shadow of you am i
every move forsake
the treasure of love i cry,
yet fear of being alone.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Heather Ober

April 4, 2013 at 12:30 PM

I just love your tankas, Harry! You are such a talent!

Sukmawati Komala

March 29, 2013 at 10:18 AM

a very nice poem dearest friend Harry <3 and i dont like being alone ..so nice to have you as my great friend <3 much luv :) Sk

Richard Lamoureux

March 23, 2013 at 12:34 AM

With lines like these I would say you have nothing to worry about.

Andrea Dietrich

March 23, 2013 at 12:33 AM

A very interesting one from you. It makes me wonder what is inspiring this one that speaks of fear of being alone.

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2013 at 11:18 AM

Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

March 22, 2013 at 10:04 AM

The fear of being alone, so true. A nice Tanka Harry. My fear is growing way too old and ending up in a nursing home, lonely and forgotten. Best Wishes, Connie