With You

Every step i take a shadow of you am i every move forsake the treasure of love i cry, yet fear of being alone. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Heather Ober

Date: 4/4/2013 12:30:00 PM

I just love your tankas, Harry! You are such a talent!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/29/2013 10:18:00 AM

a very nice poem dearest friend Harry <3 and i dont like being alone ..so nice to have you as my great friend <3 much luv :) Sk

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2013 12:34:00 AM

With lines like these I would say you have nothing to worry about.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 12:33:00 AM

A very interesting one from you. It makes me wonder what is inspiring this one that speaks of fear of being alone.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2013 11:18:00 AM

Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/22/2013 10:04:00 AM

The fear of being alone, so true. A nice Tanka Harry. My fear is growing way too old and ending up in a nursing home, lonely and forgotten. Best Wishes, Connie

Holly Moore

Date: 3/22/2013 9:37:00 AM

Reality check...I think we all fear of being alone...you were just brave enough to write it in beautiful verse. xx Holly Moore

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/22/2013 9:34:00 AM

OH..Harry. This is so...emotionally rife! I agree with MANDY...there is NO way this could happen to you! :) Hugs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/22/2013 9:15:00 AM

I am sure you will never be alone, someone with the compassion and heart that you have will always be loved xx