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Poetry/Haibun/With Tilted Wings
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1550-261-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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I had a dream that I was an eagle- flying high over vast mountains and valleys in the morn' sky 'with tilted feathers' to catch cool currents. It was just after dawn and I was hunting as my three babies were hungry. They are waiting for me, so, I must hurry. My mate left one day and did not return, so, the babies had no protection. I am scared! Still the feel of the wind is delightful, I love to glide and float, it is divine and sublime. I remember my first time leaping out of my nest. Oh, it was really scary, but my mom and dad were there to encourage me and I had been flapping my wings for days. At first I did a free fall and then, my wings took over. I will do the same for my babies soon- if they survive. Must hurry home! There on the ground a hopping rabbit, I swoop down and just like that I fly away with breakfast. Life is hard- even for a majestic bird like me!
the wind is a roar as three baby beaks open ... seeking survival

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Date: 5/27/2023 8:05:00 PM
Aww beautiful dream, mother eagle : ) soaring in the wind
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Constance La France
Date: 5/29/2023 6:46:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !
Date: 5/27/2023 1:53:00 PM
- Yes, life is hard for a mother alone with her children ... hope they will manage ... lovely dream, Constance - Best wishes in the contest ... have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:46:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and encouragement !

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