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Poetry/Haibun/With Tilted Wings
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All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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With Tilted Feathers


I had a dream that I was an eagle-   flying high over vast mountains
and valleys in the morn' sky 'with tilted feathers' to catch cool currents.
It was just after dawn and I was hunting as my three babies were hungry.
They are waiting for me, so, I must hurry.  My mate left one day and did
not return, so, the babies had no protection.  I am scared!  Still the feel
of the wind is delightful, I love to glide and float, it is divine and sublime.
I remember my first time leaping out of my nest.  Oh, it was really scary,
but my mom and dad were there to encourage me and I had been flapping
my wings for days.  At first I did a free fall and then, my wings took over.
I will do the same for my babies soon-  if they survive.  Must hurry home!
There on the ground a hopping rabbit, I swoop down and just like that
I fly away with breakfast.  Life is hard- even for a majestic bird like me!

the wind is a roar as three baby beaks open ... seeking survival
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McBride  Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Aww beautiful dream, mother eagle : ) soaring in the wind
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 1:53 PM
- Yes, life is hard for a mother alone with her children ... hope they will manage ... lovely dream, Constance - Best wishes in the contest ... have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and encouragement !
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