With This Ring I Thee Wed

on one knee at the summit of your love i look up. your beauty, your light blinds me. shaking i fear you will say no. my little box in hand  slowly ever so slowly  i open it then close it again quickly i recite these words carefully. before you i was one the first time I saw you only our eyes met, less than a second when i got home that night i told my roommate, " i'm moving out",  "why" he asked me " i met the woman i am going to marry" i answered. before you i was one, our love grew, soon WE became ONE. i am here on one knee "will you marry me" (i wait on one knee for a week? a month? finally i hear something, i think  i do hear something i do) "i do, i will, Yes" you say   i pull out the paper ring from my little box i put it on your finger, tell you  "your ring  is being made, i couldn't wait this is all i have. i made this one myself" i stand,  take my wife in my arms her smile tells me all i need to know she loves her paper ring.
Maurice Yvonne 26/09/2014 Sponsor: Judy Konos Contest Name: Will You Marry Me?
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Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Good morning, 30 plus comments I made Saturday (not just congratulations). I got back five since last night! hahaha. Talk about working like a dog over here!! Oh well, at least I get to read some good poems!! I hope you were right when you said Soup would pick up soon. What makes you say this?
Yvonne Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:44 PM
It feels like the last two weeks have been a lot slower than usual. Also I noticed that people who usually frequent with comments no longer do. I think it must be cyclical. Even contest winners do not seem to reciprotate and they used to.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 1:12 PM
A paper ring, how romantic. Congratulations on your win with this sweet poem Maurice
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:44 AM
- Maurice, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Very lovely write, made me wonder and smile, congrats on the win, Maurice
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Oh happy days Maurice... Let's celebrate and find our future wives...come pick me up.. I'm buying.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:03 PM
HAHAHAHA!!!!
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Just yell I'll answer when you get close :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Ok I'm on my way. Oh yeah one more tiny little thing. Where do you live?
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thank you a million times, you are a sweetheart making so many fine poets happy on this beautiful day.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:49 AM
N back again with congrats on ur winning romantic masterpiece Maurice!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:02 PM
You are always kind, God Bless You, thank you Dr. Sharma.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:47 AM
::) wowowow so sweet it totally made me smile.. :) while I read more of your works im liking it more and more.. :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Olive you are the one who is sweet, thank you!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:21 AM
dropping back with my congrats - you confused me you keep changing the title LOL:-) lovely to share the podium with you my friend:-) hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:59 PM
to me the title is just as important as the body of the poem - I'm lucky I have a great body:-) hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Jan. I have discovered that when a poem does not draw interest I reconsider the title and it seems to work.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:17 AM
This is so sweet! You are a romantic soul.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thank you my friend Richard.
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Romance at it's finest my friend.....I read this at work yesterday and almost forgot to come back and comment.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:07 PM
I always like it when you drop in so lucky me.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Is there a woman who would reject your proposal, Maurice, with a diamond or a paper ring? Delightful story! Good luck my friend! I enjoyed your fine poem!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Yes, in fact I have met them all. Thank you my friend.
Chircop Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:28 AM
A paper ring,that is different and sweet.Reminds me of those days in my early teens and first affections.We used tmake paper rings or wild flower rings.We use to share wooden pieces with the engraved letter of our loved one too.Sweet times of love so pure,and your paper ring gives me this feeling again,about love for what it is and not bombastic things.Aweek,a month,or even aifetime in waiting is worth it if the right on comes along.My two yr old is jumpin on me whilst I write this,so I go.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Thank you plenty Char. Lots of Love.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:09 PM
Also the idea of the paper ring was so cute. I still have this really pretty costume diamond ring I got out of a bubblegum machine for a quarter back in the 60's. I swear it looks as good as those 20 dollar rings you see today!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:35 PM
That is the same ring, its just now they charge Twenty dollars for that twenty five cent ring.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:08 PM
ahhh, this is super sweet, maurice. I love the way you get inside the mind of the one proposing marriage (I wait... for a week? for a month?) This is what makes a good writer. To express feelings without having to explain them. I would be surprised if this were not on the winners' list.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:24 PM
thank you Andrea.
Nance Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:11 PM
That is a cool story. Reminds me of my husband and I, before we were engaged, we were at a laundry mat and he got a plastic ring out of the vending machine and proposed with it. It wasn't a perfect fit, but I knew from the moment I met him he was. I loved your story too sweet
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Cas.
Guzzi Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:07 PM
So charming and just like you! Light & love
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Debbie.
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Heartfelt, warm and quite beautiful.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:26 PM
you are so kind, thank you.
Onclaud Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:51 PM
thus is sooo adorable, maurice... lovthat you can't wait for the "yes".. huggs
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:29 PM
thank you Nette.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Well done Maurice ! A perfect romantic! Trust she settles wid the paper ring! Good luck in contest!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Thank you kindly Dr. Sharma.
Bateman Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:30 AM
Beautifully done Maurice!! Best of Luck with the contest. Cheers, Gary
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:33 PM
thank you Gary.
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:26 AM
such a romantic write - I would have preferred a haribo 'jelly ring' Maurice but the paper one is pretty too - you are such a thoughtful guy:-) Seriously great romantic write good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 1:31 PM
thank you Jan.
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