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With This Ring

With This Ring I Pledge My Love You Were Sent From The King From The Heavens Above, It All Started With A Kiss At The End Of A Special Night That's When I Knew I Couldn't Miss I Knew It Was Right, The Next Thing We knew We Were Husband And Wife We Were Both saying 'I Do' I Knew It Would be for Life, I Wouldn't Change A Thing Because It's Helped Me to Grow And That Is Why This Ring I Hope Will Show, How Much You Mean To Me How Much I Treasure Your Love And That You Will See Our Love Was Made From Above

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Pat Dickey

Date: 5/5/2018 7:16:00 AM

Im so embarrassed and ashamed. Ive had to take time for myself and my mother. Jesus took her last May 30th. Shes with my daddy again, the love of her life. I never even knew my poem was featured. Thank you everyone, for the kind words. And yes, my niece Christie is not only beautiful bit she also has a brilliant mind. Love you MLP.

Amanda Madden

Date: 5/5/2009 6:32:00 AM

I love this poem, its very great. i, myself is not good at writing happy love poems...great job!! Love, Amanda

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:41:00 PM

Pat, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/27/2009 3:05:00 PM

Wonderful tribute to your love, Pat and now this writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations and best of luck in the contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Pat. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/27/2009 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured Pat. Love, Carol

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/26/2009 7:30:00 PM

Pat, this is beautiful... full of love, devotion and sweet tenderness..It is always beautiful to see one confess of their deep love and happiness especially in marriage. Congratulations on this lovely write being featured this week..God Bless*Tyesha

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/25/2009 3:37:00 PM

Hi Pat - congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ

Date: 2/23/2009 2:56:00 PM

Optimistic view. Congratulations on having your poem featured! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/23/2009 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations Pat, on your love poem "With This Ring" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 1/5/2009 5:13:00 PM

Pat this is an excellent quatrain - I just love the thought of love - Your Christie's aunt I take it - Thats one very gifted niece you have there - I reckon the aunt is pretty special herself - God Bless you, MJ

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 1/4/2009 11:35:00 AM

Great write, Pat. Christie has one cool Auntie, who is absolutely right about Christie's talent, which I see runs in the family. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems, Pat. Love, Nigel

Pat Dickey

Date: 1/4/2009 11:26:00 AM

No, this one is mine. Don't insult gma like that. lol. I guess now is the time and place to let ya'll know, Christie Moses has an Aunt that is just absolutely bequiled with her and her talent in poetry. No brag, just fact!Love you,miss you,k by