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With the Birds

more to life than meets the eye ~ said the blind man who slipped in a pigsty but some swine oinked pigs might fly ~ this trip up will cause a huge overfly and sure enough as days went by ~ eyes appeared damn vultures in the sky the lesson learnt here don’t ask why ~ sh!t just happens when in oversupply

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Date: 7/25/2023 4:40:00 PM
Good one . Well done
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/26/2023 1:29:00 AM
Thank you SV, cheers David
Date: 7/23/2023 10:05:00 AM
very witty David, thanks for the smiles:-) hugs jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/23/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Jan, probably a little serious message embedded in here too, I’m still looking for it though! Cheers David
Date: 7/22/2023 1:23:00 PM
I see the humor. Birdseye view! I won't ask. B0l
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/27/2023 11:19:00 AM
A double whopper with cheese yes please!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/23/2023 12:25:00 PM
guano!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/22/2023 5:21:00 PM
Americans shorten everything, a Whopper just isn't a whopper anymore! Epic, not so grand.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2023 3:02:00 PM
Heya Anaya, that’s good enough for me, humour comes in many forms, your spelling is better lol, cheers David
Date: 7/22/2023 5:21:00 AM
For Jay Narain’s humorous contest Howmanysyllables!
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