David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

With the Birds

more to life than meets the eye ~ said the blind man who slipped in a pigsty 

but some swine oinked pigs might fly ~ this trip up will cause a huge overfly 

and sure enough as days went by ~ eyes appeared damn vultures in the sky 

the lesson learnt here don’t ask why ~ sh!t just happens when in oversupply

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Speaks Volumes July 25, 2023 at 4:40 PM Good one . Well done David Kavanagh July 26, 2023 at 1:29 AM Thank you SV, cheers David

Jan Allison July 23, 2023 at 10:05 AM very witty David, thanks for the smiles:-) hugs jan xx David Kavanagh July 23, 2023 at 10:43 AM Thanks Jan, probably a little serious message embedded in here too, I’m still looking for it though! Cheers David

I Am Anaya July 22, 2023 at 1:23 PM I see the humor. Birdseye view! I won't ask. B0l David Kavanagh July 27, 2023 at 11:19 AM A double whopper with cheese yes please! I Am Anaya July 23, 2023 at 12:25 PM guano! I Am Anaya July 22, 2023 at 5:21 PM Americans shorten everything, a Whopper just isn't a whopper anymore! Epic, not so grand. David Kavanagh July 22, 2023 at 3:02 PM Heya Anaya, that’s good enough for me, humour comes in many forms, your spelling is better lol, cheers David

David Kavanagh July 22, 2023 at 5:21 AM For Jay Narain’s humorous contest Howmanysyllables!