With Purpose

walking      walking
humpback guy in rags
limping with purpose
going somewhere
to a nowhere place

Dave Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Yvonne Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 7:23 PM
A piece written from the heart. A wonderful write. Lots of Love armand.
Austin Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Forgot to add - you're one of those guys.
Austin Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 1:51 PM
This guy was walking fast. I must have seen him, over the months and years, many times. Some guys just don't let life get them down. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:30 AM
I just saw your note to me. it's nice that you wrote about a real person!
Austin Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:25 PM
st saw a shot of Salt Lake City, nestled at the foot of mountains. What a beautiful place. daver
La France Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Dave, this is wonderful, we see these people everyday, but you truly SEE them, I am loving this 7 ~
Austin Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:27 PM
How about these young guys standing on street corners with a tin can begging for coins. Probably a lot of them are x-GIs
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 4:08 PM
I love this, Daver.
Austin Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:06 PM
True story. I wonder if he lives anywhere - maybe a box. Love, daver
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Hi Daver, I bet you miss me. hehehe :) Anyways, that sounds like my oldest son, without the limp and rage. LOL, sometimes I wonder where he's going if anywhere is right. Great Tanka. LINDA
Austin Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:17 PM
This guy was real. I don't know where he went. Haven't seen him for a long while now. Hope he climbed the stairway to heaven. Love, daver
Nance Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:42 PM
going somewhere to a nowhere place- I like that description.
Austin Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Thanks, Casarah. We've seen this pitiful guy several times and wondered about him. Now I will visit you. Love, daver
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